Posts by applesauce32
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Last Post: Feb 18, 2010
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applesauce32 Feb 18, 2010
applesauce32 Sep 11, 2009
Essays /
Stronger argument claim needed. [4]
I have to write an essay on a time where i was embarrassed by someone's use or misuse of a particular language. my example is a (hispanic) coworker not realizing the way she said something was extremely rude and the tone she used was inappropriate for the situation. as a whole the claim i'm trying to make is that immigrants use English in the wrong way, it's not what you say it's how you say it kinda thing. i started with this vague argument claim "Many immigrants misuse the English language and get themselves into trouble." it's so vague..i just can't think of anything else!
applesauce32 Sep 11, 2009
Writing Feedback /
the problems of balancing school, job and a family. [7]
What is the specific writing assignment?
as for my opinion, i think the introduction is pretty on key. my mind is dead at the moment, so i can't offer much advice on how to continue it. but the start is good!
applesauce32 Sep 11, 2009
Speeches /
Does America Still Have Heroes? [28]
you could start it off by grabbing the audience's attention by telling a deep,detailed heroic story..then proceed to give evidence that heroes do exist
applesauce32 Apr 28, 2009
applesauce32 Apr 27, 2009
Research Papers /
Problem and Solution essay- global warming [10]
i'm having trouble starting my research paper on addressing the problem of global warming and its solutions..
my paper is as follows
-intro
-what is global warming/whats causing it
-its effects
-solutions..
-what the future looks like
-conclusion
does this sound good?
Writing
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