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After 19 century, everything changes dramatically like never before - Life today is more comfortable [8]
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After 19 century, everything changes dramatically like never before. An influx of artificial machines and new lifestyles impact our world. Although people lived before 19 century never benefited from these changes, I think they leaded easier and more comfortable lifetime than we do because of these reasons.
First, their life was simple. They didn't have lots of possibilities like we do. There weren't a lot people who would think that he or she wants to go to somewhere really far away. People in china today take every avenue going to the US but in the past whoever went to Beijing was considered huge! Also, their education was not thought so important. Nowadays, there are two hills struggle many Chinese school kids and their parent named "Test for middle school education" and "test for high school education" and they are considered as "only way to happy life" in China today. But back to my grandparents' day, it never happened.
Additionally, their life was comfortable. China is raising its population and pollution simultaneously that one in past couldn't imagine. China recently gets a seriously problem on air pollution because of particle matter (PM). It causes range from prematurely death, respiration failure, and lung cancer to reproduction system shutting-off. Also, accumulate of population causes raises in cost of houses, cost of education, and cost of public services and so on.
In conclusion, life in those days was in the past and there is no way we can call it back. Human innovation and technology improvement have a bad aftermath on our day but who can be sure saying our future isn't bright?