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Name: Tran Hoan
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Dec 16, 2013
Grammar, Usage / Grammatical errors in this sentence [15]

"Finally, after analysing the questionnaire and interview data, we summarize the elements of video that test-takers really pay attention to and the functions of those elements."

Perhaps one of the following - in my opinion:
1/ summarized:
2/ elements of a video: in case you're mentioning a random video, the indefinite article is needed ("the" if it is a particular video)
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