Undergraduate / Four days - Mom and Dad at a time - Barnard College Supplement [5]

I really liked your essay, and don't see anything wrong with it. That's funny, I'm applying to Barnard, too, and wrote mine about growing up in a Mormon community. Best of luck!!

P.S. I think the words you are looking for when you say "conservancy and libertarianism" is "conservatism and liberalism." Libertarianism is something different.