asdrubaljimenez
Dec 27, 2013
Writing Feedback / Many tertiary institutions; University should accept gender equality in classes [4]
Yes, it is absolutely a crazy IELTS topic. I agree with your guidance, but when it comes to IELTS, time is your enemy. So you have to be concise and short, that is why I wrote it that way. What I'd like to know is whether this essay is good enough to get a good grade in the IELTS test, namely, if it has enough coherence and cohesion as well as an acceptable range of grammar resources.
Yes, it is absolutely a crazy IELTS topic. I agree with your guidance, but when it comes to IELTS, time is your enemy. So you have to be concise and short, that is why I wrote it that way. What I'd like to know is whether this essay is good enough to get a good grade in the IELTS test, namely, if it has enough coherence and cohesion as well as an acceptable range of grammar resources.