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Name: Precious Uwaya
Joined: Dec 29, 2013
Last Post: Dec 31, 2013
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School: Medical Profesiions Teacher Preperation Academy

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Precious123   
Dec 31, 2013
Undergraduate / I am not exactly sure what matters to me; Stanford [8]

change how you start the essay,
When I was just beginning high school what mattered to me the most was doing well in school so that I could have a better life in the future and I wanted to learn because I have a thirst for knowledge.

that is too long you probably want to shorten it to "As a freshman in highschool my priority was performing well to quench my thirst for knowledge and attain a good future

Precious123   
Dec 29, 2013
Undergraduate / Botson and Careerlink - BU MY DREAM SCHOOL [4]

In no more than 250 words, please tell us why BU is a good fit for you and what specifically has led you to apply for admission.*

Last summer, I took a biotechnology class at the University of Saint Joseph in West Hartford Connecticut which peaked my interest in biochemistry and molecular biology. I knew right away that this was what I wanted to study in college. Sometime later I attended a college fair where I received a Boston University pamphlet. As I scanned through the pamphlet, there were many interesting majors however I got extremely excited when I saw that B.U had biochemistry molecular biology as a major. The joy I felt seeing those two subjects combined as one major was overwhelming and I knew without the shadow of a doubt that B.U is a good fit for me because of the amazing variety of studies which will make it possible for me to pursue my other interest without compromising my future goal to be in medicine. Majoring in biochemistry and molecular biology at B.U will help me prepare for this future. B.U also has many wonderful internships because of its state of the art technology, resources such as Careerlink and its location in Boston.

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