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Jan 5, 2014
Writing Feedback / People need fight against unfairness of authorities decision and protect themselves from its results [5]
its for sat
its for sat
braska1
Jan 4, 2014
Writing Feedback / People need fight against unfairness of authorities decision and protect themselves from its results [5]
just started to study sat essays plz help me out. and also plz score 1 to 6 my essay in ur way
Many people believe that people must obey their authority's decision. However I believe that people should protect rights and stand up against authority's wrong decision because sometimes it leads people to disaster.
Sometimes superior's dogmatic decision is not what people truly want. Dogmatic decision sometimes asks workers to sacrifice what they have. For example, there are many workers who work at their work place on weekends against their will, even though they had worked on their full weekdays. Workers work on weekends because their superiors want them to, otherwise superior will fire workers who disobeyed decision and hire new workers; this is why workers establish labor union.
Labor union is probably the most effective way to protect workers' rights because group of people's power is much stronger than individual's. For example, when workers feel they are unfairly treated by their superiors, workers will gather up and protest over superior's power by labor dispute. Labor dispute is very strong and effective way to fight against superior's decision because labor dispute not only gets attention from superior but also attention from media so that people in society will know about their protesting.
Eventually, superiors will talk to workers and try to make compromise because superiors are afraid not only that workers' labor dispute will last long enough to make a more loss to their company but also cynical views from society, acknowledged by media, which will damage their company's image. After workers and superiors made a compromise, workers will get back to their positions, and workers will get their rights back or even more. I think that act of labor union is one good example why workers should protect themselves from dogmatic decision that forces workers to sacrifice.
Probably, not questioning authority's decision will make society function more smoothly. However, I think that people should gather up and fight against unfairness of authority's decision and protect themselves from authority's decision that is mistreating people.
just started to study sat essays plz help me out. and also plz score 1 to 6 my essay in ur way
Many people believe that people must obey their authority's decision. However I believe that people should protect rights and stand up against authority's wrong decision because sometimes it leads people to disaster.
Sometimes superior's dogmatic decision is not what people truly want. Dogmatic decision sometimes asks workers to sacrifice what they have. For example, there are many workers who work at their work place on weekends against their will, even though they had worked on their full weekdays. Workers work on weekends because their superiors want them to, otherwise superior will fire workers who disobeyed decision and hire new workers; this is why workers establish labor union.
Labor union is probably the most effective way to protect workers' rights because group of people's power is much stronger than individual's. For example, when workers feel they are unfairly treated by their superiors, workers will gather up and protest over superior's power by labor dispute. Labor dispute is very strong and effective way to fight against superior's decision because labor dispute not only gets attention from superior but also attention from media so that people in society will know about their protesting.
Eventually, superiors will talk to workers and try to make compromise because superiors are afraid not only that workers' labor dispute will last long enough to make a more loss to their company but also cynical views from society, acknowledged by media, which will damage their company's image. After workers and superiors made a compromise, workers will get back to their positions, and workers will get their rights back or even more. I think that act of labor union is one good example why workers should protect themselves from dogmatic decision that forces workers to sacrifice.
Probably, not questioning authority's decision will make society function more smoothly. However, I think that people should gather up and fight against unfairness of authority's decision and protect themselves from authority's decision that is mistreating people.
braska1
Jan 4, 2014
Undergraduate / 'Being an engineer takes big responsibility' City College Essay [3]
Being an engineer takes big responsibility. isnt it kinda too weak to start essay with being words? well maybe its my bias but i think it is...
Being an engineer takes big responsibility. isnt it kinda too weak to start essay with being words? well maybe its my bias but i think it is...
braska1
Jan 3, 2014
Undergraduate / 'isolation and alienation by communities' success can be disastrous? [NEW]
hi im new here and i just started my sat study. please gimme a advise i really dont know what i have to do plus im ged student i have probably more errors than others...
Many people believe that success only gives us benefits. However, I believe that success can lead us to disaster because success makes people arrogant, and arrogant leads people to make false step forward.
Success requires a lot of things such as, effort, time and endurance. Because successful people went through all things what challenge them, they will become conceited easy. When successful people become conceited, they will start to underestimate or mistreat people who didn't go through challenges that successful people had to face. Eventually, people who got mistreated will leave their successful one, and successful one will be isolated in society. How can people who got isolated by their around in society called as successful person? I think isolation and alienation by communities are the most disastrous situation in modern days.
Because successful people experienced hard challenges, while they were trying to be successful sometimes overestimate themselves. Successful people think themselves as they can succeed whatever that they want to be or to do, and they will start to expand their work in other fields without any knowledge that they need. Eventually, successful people's jobs as in different fields will be demolished or ruined because not only they didn't have any knowledge in that field, but also their self-overestimation, caused by their previous success, blinded themselves.
In addition, Success is not fully success if one had been successful without his or her contribution. Successful people who got on certain level by other's contribution or luck often ruin themselves as well because they don't even know what they need to know or how to control their fortune. Faulty success does get people on certain level, but people who did not put effort in their success will get a lot worse life than life that they had before after they get ruined, and I think that if people cannot even have their previous life back, being successful is just a leading way to disaster.
Success is the highest possible way to live happy or wealthy life, only if one can manages, thinks and be humble. Otherwise, success will destroy people's life in social and financial ways.
hi im new here and i just started my sat study. please gimme a advise i really dont know what i have to do plus im ged student i have probably more errors than others...
Many people believe that success only gives us benefits. However, I believe that success can lead us to disaster because success makes people arrogant, and arrogant leads people to make false step forward.
Success requires a lot of things such as, effort, time and endurance. Because successful people went through all things what challenge them, they will become conceited easy. When successful people become conceited, they will start to underestimate or mistreat people who didn't go through challenges that successful people had to face. Eventually, people who got mistreated will leave their successful one, and successful one will be isolated in society. How can people who got isolated by their around in society called as successful person? I think isolation and alienation by communities are the most disastrous situation in modern days.
Because successful people experienced hard challenges, while they were trying to be successful sometimes overestimate themselves. Successful people think themselves as they can succeed whatever that they want to be or to do, and they will start to expand their work in other fields without any knowledge that they need. Eventually, successful people's jobs as in different fields will be demolished or ruined because not only they didn't have any knowledge in that field, but also their self-overestimation, caused by their previous success, blinded themselves.
In addition, Success is not fully success if one had been successful without his or her contribution. Successful people who got on certain level by other's contribution or luck often ruin themselves as well because they don't even know what they need to know or how to control their fortune. Faulty success does get people on certain level, but people who did not put effort in their success will get a lot worse life than life that they had before after they get ruined, and I think that if people cannot even have their previous life back, being successful is just a leading way to disaster.
Success is the highest possible way to live happy or wealthy life, only if one can manages, thinks and be humble. Otherwise, success will destroy people's life in social and financial ways.
