Undergraduate / Engineering - University of Toronto - "As I journeyed thorough life" [4]

Hi, I am applying for track one engineering in UofT.

The application process requires me to write an essay that covers the following questions: What inspired me to pursue an engineering degree? Why would you want to study at university of Toronto? What skills from activities have you developed that will support your success as a student and engineer?

Below I have posted the essay I wrote. Please help check if my essay needs "repairing" and also help check my spelling mistakes and grammar mistakes. English is also my worst subject so essays are a big fear of mine.