Undergraduate / Our greatest glory is not in never failing,but in rising up every time: Recount a failure [3]

Do you think that quotes are good in essays? My teacher told me that quotes are not good in essays, specially for IELTS. People what do you think?


I think its better to say I am not an exception to this either as a member of this team as well.


I feel that its better to put them in one sentences, maybe We have been studying for over two monthes before the participation in that competition. You should to revise your essay and correct some sentences in order to link them in one sentences by using some linking words.

Scholarship / I will have to get straight A's; Long and short term goals! [6]

I think that you have some problems with structure in sentences. You should be a bit formal. But I also have the same problem.