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Name: Thomas Curran
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coohran   
Feb 15, 2014
Undergraduate / MSc Econometrics - studying in the Netherlands. [2]

Applying to Maastricht University. There's no set question for the motivation letter from SBE, but an example of what they expect at another faculty is:

"We are interested in hearing about your reasons for wanting to study abroad, what draws you to the programme and Maastricht University, or the Netherlands, being in Europe etc. You may want to highlight academics and certain courses, the culture, history, personal goals and so on. Please feel free to interpret it as you wish, we would like to hear about what inspired you to apple and what you hope to gain from the experience."

With that in mind, here's what I have so far. Criticism would be much appreciated! Personally I think it sounds a bit too waffle-y.

Thanks :)

My first economics lesson at school instilled a profound curiosity for uncovering the intricacies behind economic decision-making. Studying at undergraduate level has developed my understanding of the theoretical foundations of economics and the mathematical methods supporting them. It was here I was first introduced to econometrics and, captivated by its ability to draw causal inferences from data that may seem unrelated on the surface, opted for every module available in order to broaden my understanding as much as possible.

Whilst studying at undergraduate, I accumulated good experience with Stata and EViews, running regressions such as OLS, IV, Probit, Logit, and ARMA models, using small and large data sets (e.g. Labour Force Survey). These modules extensively covered model specification, sources of bias and strategies to overcome them, highlighting the natural limitations of data.

The modules in finance were highly quantitative and complemented the modules in Econometrics well. The Empirical Finance module explored the efficient market hypothesis in great detail, introducing expectation algebra (including the law of iterated expectations), testing for anomalies, back testing investment strategies, and calculating risk-adjusted returns in Excel using the CAPM and Multi-Factor models. I have also gained familiarity with stochastic processes (e.g. Wiener and Itô processes) through the Futures & Options module; this will be useful for the Time Series Methods and Dynamic Econometrics course, which I plan to take as an option.

Time-series analysis fascinates me. Consequently, I chose to conduct an empirical thesis in my final year, modelling the dynamic effects of a real devaluation on the bilateral trade balance between Brazil and the United States. This used an ARDL bounds-test approach for identifying cointegration that went beyond the scope of the syllabus. I have also self-taught models commonly used for volatility such as ARCH and GARCH. Having exposed myself to these methods independently, I will have a strong basis to perform well on the course, given I have already studied Unit Root Testing (for seasonal and non-seasonal orders), Cointegration, and VAR models to a high level of detail. As an undergraduate, I attended several elementary MATLAB workshops, where I learnt how to run numerical simulations of Macroeconomic models e.g. Lucas Model. I continue to supplement my learning through online courses on Coursera.

Many economic transactions today are mediated by computers and will become increasingly so in future. What's more, online social networks such as Twitter and Facebook passively collect information from its users around the world. The potential for extracting useful insight from this data is invigorating. Applications of machine learning techniques for conducting econometric analysis on high-frequency data interest me greatly; such as the Bayesian Structural Time Series system Hal Varian applied to Google Trends data, predicting initial claims for unemployment benefits in the U.S. 4-5 days before its official release.

I aspire to work in an international organisation as a quantitative analyst. This will require a highly sophisticated skillset that incorporates exceptional quantitative skills and an ability to present findings in a clear manner, able to be understood by the layman. The intensive and hands-on approach to learning at Maastricht University will enable me to achieve my ambitions and fulfil this role effectively.

Problem-Based Learning strongly motivates my decision to apply here and, having spoken with Maastricht graduates, I am confident that this approach is well suited to my learning style. Emphasising active discussion and applying the course material together with my peers will nurture a much deeper level of understanding than can be acquired from solving examples in a textbook. I enjoy engaging in intellectual debate with my peers and supervisors and challenging my opinions as I feel this is one of the best means of expanding my perspectives.

As vice captain for my university intra-mural rugby team, and a member of the Investment & Finance Society, I have experience organising large groups of people and contributing to panel discussions with industry experts. I believe these positions of responsibility have developed highly transferrable communication skills that will continue to thrive throughout the programme.

Whilst studying, it is important that I grow myself both academically and culturally. Learning in an environment surrounded by international students will facilitate an exchange of ideas that will benefit all parties. The semester abroad at a partner university is a valuable opportunity that I intend to take full advantage of. We live in an increasingly globalised economy that employs an international and mobile workforce. Exposing myself to a variety of cultures and people will help develop the robust global network that I seek to build during my time at Maastricht.

In closing, I believe the international focus and ethos of learning through collaboration at Maastricht University fosters a rich academic environment within in which I can flourish. If accepted, I will be an active member of the programme and strive to add value through hard work and intellectual prowess.
coohran   
Feb 15, 2014
Essays / Catch a bus/Chasing a bus (commentary) [4]

How about:

"Good afternoon ladies and gentlemen, I hope you're all having a glorious day. This is Joe Blogs, welcoming you to this monumental event that is sure to keep you and your family at the edge of your seats. Paul Smith, successful idiot and professional layabout, will today be chasing the epitome of British ingenuity; the double-decker bus. I'm joined here by "Sarky Marky", last year's surprise champion who defied the bookies predictions and managed to catch the bus in no less than 63 yards. How are you feeling about today's young contender Mark?"

- Give some context to the event - describe what's going to be happening, your expectations of the outcome etc.
- Use exciting language to engage the audience and maintain their attention (good adjective, although not too long)
coohran   
Feb 15, 2014
Undergraduate / Personal Statement Essay for a Graduate Tax Program. [4]

1.

I felt that I just had to get through the class and never come back to the boring subject again

2.

During the first half of the course I was very confused and didn't really understand many concepts and things I was hearing in class.

3.

I spent more time than average of what I spent for any other of my classes and still didn't understand the material.

4.

The choices for my profession have always been changing.

I understand that you want to put across the struggle you've had in the past with the subject and that you wish to rise to the challenge, but I believe the statements I've quoted above do yourself a great disservice. You are, perhaps unintentionally, revealing negative traits about yourself and need to address them.

Referring to the quotes above:
1. Though you're talking about the past, you're still putting across the idea that you found it "boring". Admissions tutors are more likely to pick someone who has always been interested/captivated by the subject.

2. Suggests you may lack the ability to succeed and are likely to struggle on the course.

3. Like #2, it may cause the admissions tutor to cast doubt over your ability to keep up with the course material.

4. This creates uncertainty over your intentions for study. Admissions officers may be thinking to themselves "Does this guy really know what he wants out of this? How likely is he to change his mind mid-course and drop out?"

I hope you can see where I'm coming from. I'm being necessarily critical as this is the best way to improve your application.

I would remove the negatives and try to always focus on the positives. For instance, you could talk about how you've always been interested and found the material to be challenging at first, but through hard work and dedication you have overcome your past failures and this convinces you that you can succeed in this field. Make them feel as if they you've always wanted to be a taxation expert and that this is your life's calling.
coohran   
Feb 13, 2014
Graduate / Since my first economics lesson; Motivation Essay for MSc Econometrics [6]

Whilst researching the causes and effects of growing youth unemployment, I discovered a mismatch between the skills of graduates and the demands of global industry. Perhaps for earlier generations a degree was sufficient to secure a successful career. However, the paradigm has shifted in today's highly competitive labour market. Employers in the 21st century care less for what you know, and more for what you can do.

My first economics lesson at school instilled a profound curiosity. Studying at undergraduate level developed my understanding of the theoretical foundations of economics and the mathematics supporting them. I was surprised by the dearth of econometric methods covered by the syllabus during my thesis research, soon realising that undergraduate Economics is a mere introduction to a rapidly expanding discipline.

I aspire to lead an international career working as a quantitative analyst in a multinational organisation. My aim is to employ the statistical tools developed on this course to extract insights from large datasets and support key decision-making. My ambitions require a university that emphasizes the diffusion of culture and knowledge as I wish to gain mastery in this field and apply those insights wherever I work.

I am drawn to this course for its rigor and intensity; it is in this environment that I will learn the most. I am fascinated by time-series analysis and, in addition to ARDL models used in my thesis, have self-taught models commonly used for volatility such as ARCH and GARCH; these will be useful for the Financial Econometrics course. The approach taken towards the thesis is attractive as it utilises the university's proximity to large organisations and will enable me to engage with real-world problems.

Today, most transactions are mediated through computers. As data becomes cheaper to store, the growing potential for collection and analysis is exciting. I am intrigued by applications of machine learning techniques and the potential benefits for econometric analysis. Workshops on programming in R have been insightful and I continue to supplement my learning through participation in online courses offered by Coursera.

Enrolling at the University of XXXXX is conducive to realising my ambitions. If accepted I will be an active member of the programme, interacting with lecturers and peers, and strive to add value through hard work and intellectual discernment.

It's 378 words! If the prompt says "Please describe in about 300 words why you wish to attend the programme." Will I be heavily penalised for going slightly over? I'm not sure what to take out really as it includes everything I want to put across.

Please help! :/
coohran   
Feb 4, 2014
Graduate / Since my first economics lesson; Motivation Essay for MSc Econometrics [6]

Hello, thank you for your comments. I apologise for not including the prompt. Please find below a revision, as well as the original prompt.

Please describe in about 300 words why you wish to attend the programme.

Whilst researching the causes and effects of the rising levels of youth unemployment, I discovered a skills mismatch between the supply of graduates and the demands of global industry. Perhaps for earlier generations a degree was sufficient to secure a successful career. However, in today's highly competitive labour market the paradigm has shifted. Employers in the 21st century care less for what you know, and more for what you can do.

My first economics lesson at school instilled a profound curiosity. Studying at undergraduate level developed my understanding of the theoretical foundations of economics and the mathematics that supports them. I was surprised by the dearth of econometric methods covered by the syllabus during my thesis research, soon realising that undergraduate Economics is a mere introduction to a rapidly expanding discipline.

I aspire to lead an international career, working as a quantitative analyst in a European institution before working on other continents. My ambitions require a university that emphasizes the diffusion of culture and knowledge as I wish to gain mastery in this field and apply those insights wherever I work.

I am drawn to this course for its reputation as a being rigorous and challenging; it is in this environment that I will learn the most. I am fascinated by time-series analysis and, in addition to ARDL models used in my thesis, have self-taught models commonly used for volatility such as ARCH and GARCH; these will be useful for the Financial Econometrics course. The approach taken towards the thesis is attractive as it utilises the university's proximity to the financial centre and will enable me to engage with problems directly relevant to an organisation's operations.

Enrolling at the University of XXXXX is conducive to realising my ambitions. If accepted I will be an active member of the programme, interacting with lecturers and peers, and strive to add value through hard work and intellectual discernment.

315 words in total, which I think should be ok...
coohran   
Feb 2, 2014
Graduate / Since my first economics lesson; Motivation Essay for MSc Econometrics [6]

Hi there!

I'm trying to write a motivation essay for entry to a graduate program in the Netherlands (coming from the UK with BSc Economics).

The instructions say "around 300 words", which is rather tight. I'm currently at 358.

Any tips/criticisms would be greatly appreciated!

Since my first economics lesson at A-level, an insatiable curiosity has resonated within me. Undergraduate study has furthered my understanding of the theoretical foundations of economics, and numerical methods that support them. When researching my thesis I was captivated by economic methods not covered by the syllabus. This led to the realization that undergraduate economics is a mere introduction to an ever-expanding discipline.

Through studying econometrics at an advanced level and interacting with lecturers and peers, I aim to become well versed in this field and apply that knowledge once I start work. I am applying to this programme specifically for its rigour. My motivation for postgraduate study is to develop my analytical skills in size and sophistication, not to simply obtain another qualification.

Captivated by its ability to predict the behaviour of interrelated variables, I chose every econometrics module available on my course. In doing so I have gained good experience using Stata and EViews, running regressions such as OLS, IV, Probit, Logit and ARMA models, on data sets of varying size. I am fascinated by time-series analysis and, in addition to ARDL models used in my thesis, have self-taught models commonly used for volatility such as ARCH and GARCH; these will be useful for the Financial Econometrics course.

My eventual career path once I complete my studies is of vital importance and I aspire to work as a quantitative analyst within a multinational corporation in Europe. The approach taken at the University of XXXXX with regards to the thesis is highly appealing as I will be able to engage with problems directly relevant to an organization's operations.

This course provides an opportunity to improve not only my education, but also myself as an individual. Learning in an international setting within a culturally diverse student body will facilitate an exchange of views and ideas beneficial to all parties.

I strive to be the best at what I do and the teaching approach at the University of XXXXX is conducive to the achievement of my goals. If accepted, I will be an active member of the programme and strive to add value through hard work and intellectual prowess.
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