k__katerina
Feb 9, 2014
Poetry / my first poem. have some difficulties with a title for it [3]
i really can't decide with the most suitable title for it. i do hope somebody will be able to help me giving some propositions and in addition perhaps some critics:)
I'm enslaved and he's still here
And he knows that I'm in fear
I am sure he can master
And his movements are much faster
All my efforts are in vain
And his presence brings me pain
He is stronger and I feel
That we'll never make a deal
This incessant voice is here
Always speaks inside my head
And I can't get rid of fear
Voice reminds me what I've had
It pursues me all the time
All the feelings left behind
I can't listen anymore
Someone, close this open door
Should I think it's not the end?
May I hope for help from friend?
I'm possessed by voice's noise
I'm afraid I have no choice
Though I'd tried to contend
Came the time to understand
I'm exhausted - he's untiring
And his victory is coming
This incessant voice is here
Always speaks inside my head
And I can't get rid of fear
Voice reminds me what I've had
i really can't decide with the most suitable title for it. i do hope somebody will be able to help me giving some propositions and in addition perhaps some critics:)
I'm enslaved and he's still here
And he knows that I'm in fear
I am sure he can master
And his movements are much faster
All my efforts are in vain
And his presence brings me pain
He is stronger and I feel
That we'll never make a deal
This incessant voice is here
Always speaks inside my head
And I can't get rid of fear
Voice reminds me what I've had
It pursues me all the time
All the feelings left behind
I can't listen anymore
Someone, close this open door
Should I think it's not the end?
May I hope for help from friend?
I'm possessed by voice's noise
I'm afraid I have no choice
Though I'd tried to contend
Came the time to understand
I'm exhausted - he's untiring
And his victory is coming
This incessant voice is here
Always speaks inside my head
And I can't get rid of fear
Voice reminds me what I've had