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Feb 16, 2014
rashs
Feb 15, 2014
Writing Feedback / My Flight to The U.S.A [6]
Pahan
I am learning english in institute, this is just homework to write paragraph.
I mean my journey of completing studies, but here I focus in the long of flight.
I change this sentences to
Fly to the U.S.A.! It is a dream for everyone in my country to complete education, it filled with difficulties, start with flight, it is a very long flight.
That's right?
Thank you for your corporation
Pahan
I am learning english in institute, this is just homework to write paragraph.
I mean my journey of completing studies, but here I focus in the long of flight.
I change this sentences to
Fly to the U.S.A.! It is a dream for everyone in my country to complete education, it filled with difficulties, start with flight, it is a very long flight.
That's right?
Thank you for your corporation
rashs
Feb 15, 2014
Writing Feedback / My Flight to The U.S.A [6]
Fly to the U.S.A.! It is a dream for everyone in my country to complete education, but it is a very long trip forever. In the morning of Dec 29th, my brother and I went to Istanbul airport, I was taking the last photos of Istanbul while I waited the airport announcement. Next, I rode the airplane and took my seat, I was so exciting. After a while, the pilot said "Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen، this is your captain speaking, we like to welcome you on board Turkish Flight to Houston, flight duration is around 13hours. Once again we thank you for choosing to fly with us today and we hope you enjoy your flight" All right, after I got my lunch, I fell into a deep sleep until before four hours to landing. I spent the remaining time watching movies and documentary programs. In the last hour, I was looking to plane camera, I saw the US from the top. Finally, I reached American lands, I arrived in Houston airport and from there I flew to Phoenix airport, and from there I entered my home in Tempe. I planned to come back home with master certificate.
Fly to the U.S.A.! It is a dream for everyone in my country to complete education, but it is a very long trip forever. In the morning of Dec 29th, my brother and I went to Istanbul airport, I was taking the last photos of Istanbul while I waited the airport announcement. Next, I rode the airplane and took my seat, I was so exciting. After a while, the pilot said "Good afternoon, ladies and gentlemen، this is your captain speaking, we like to welcome you on board Turkish Flight to Houston, flight duration is around 13hours. Once again we thank you for choosing to fly with us today and we hope you enjoy your flight" All right, after I got my lunch, I fell into a deep sleep until before four hours to landing. I spent the remaining time watching movies and documentary programs. In the last hour, I was looking to plane camera, I saw the US from the top. Finally, I reached American lands, I arrived in Houston airport and from there I flew to Phoenix airport, and from there I entered my home in Tempe. I planned to come back home with master certificate.