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Posts by Gustav02
Name: Gustav Ivgraphovich
Joined: Mar 16, 2014
Last Post: Mar 23, 2014
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From: Russian Federation
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Gustav02   
Mar 18, 2014
Writing Feedback / "Many holidaymakers would rather stay in a hotel room. Others prefer a campsite." (Essay) [9]

Unfortunately, I do not quite understand your point. I think it's more clear to state my opinion first then get down to reasoning so that the reader would understand which side I surely support?

As for me, I strongly believe camping play a considerable part in an enjoyable pastime. As the issue is relevant, I have a few reasons in favour of my opinion to recite. Firstly, the great outdoors bring us in contact with nature. It enables us to feel more at ease and exempt from daily bothers.

I thought I had explained why campsite is more preferred. For ex., I can put (because) at the beginning of the fourth sentence which illustrates the first argumentation, doesn't it?
Gustav02   
Mar 18, 2014
Writing Feedback / "Many holidaymakers would rather stay in a hotel room. Others prefer a campsite." (Essay) [9]

Well, this English Essay is meant for the national exam in my country. I followed a well-defined essay plan:

− make an introduction (state the problem)
− express your personal opinion and give 2-3 reasons for your opinion
− express an opposing opinion and give 1-2 reasons for this opposing opinion
− explain why you don't agree with the opposing opinion
− make a conclusion restating your position

Hope it's clear to you now. Thank you!
Gustav02   
Mar 16, 2014
Writing Feedback / "Many holidaymakers would rather stay in a hotel room. Others prefer a campsite." (Essay) [9]

What is your opinoin?
For the time being going on vacation is quite widespread among people. Some of them claim it's a lot more comfortable to stay in a hotel room whereas other think vice versa preferring the under-the-stars conveniences.

As for me, I strongly believe camping play a considerable part in an enjoyable pastime. As the issue is relevant, I have a few reasons in favour of my opinion to recite. Firstly, the great outdoors bring us in contact with nature. It enables us to feel more at ease and exempt from daily bothers. Secondly, from the scientific point of view it's much healthier to spend our time in the frtesh air as much as possible. In addition, campsite and other outside activities are a golden opportunity to have a comprehensive rest-time.

However, there are opponents of such standpoint. According to them, campsite facilities do not suggest luxury apartments which could satisfy physical needs. Last but not least, they also suppose any bugs caught in the open air lead to serious diseases.

Actually, I do not quite agree with the above-mentioned. It is to be noted that nature and its resources serve as healing agents. Futhermore, it's extremely engaging to experience the ancient anscestors' way of life.

In conclusion, I'd like to emphasize the social significance of the issue. To my mind, today's community feels embarassed at the idea of staying out in the wild. Nevertheless, I think it's a crucial step towards an unpredictable vacation for potential holidaymakers.

Thank you very much for you comments in advance!
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