Writing Feedback / Teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Good Idea? Knowledge vs Money. [8]

As we know became a student its not easy because you have responsible to your parents. But as a teenagers, we have many needs for living. If just take it for your parents maybe its not enough. Teenagers have jobs while they are still students, I think is a good idea. I have some reason why I say that.

Firstly, I ever have job while I'm still a student so I know. that is not easy, I must school from in the morning until evening and then I must work until night. I don't have many time for take a rest, hang out with my friend, and I might don't have time for my family. But, step by step I can understand, work not only use your power but you need strategy. Strategy that I mean you should be set your time, make schedule, and do it all with consistent.

Secondly, you're teenagers so you live in your family. Every day always with them. As teenagers that have work maybe you will be difficult to make your parents believe that you can school while work. They will say to you, the first and more important you must school. If you want to work just wait until you finish your school or university. But, can we wait until finish it? I think, we don't need to wait. If you really want to work you sure know what will you do to school while work.

In conclusion, Try think in your mind with school you can get knowledge, and with work you can get money. So if you want knowledge and money so you should be school while work. Actually, all of we can school while work if you can control your time and your mind.

Writing Feedback / What are the qualities of a good neighbor? 'care your attitude to other people' [7]

Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

As we know, people live near our home can we call neighbor. Neighbor is people more near with us, can be part of our family. When we sick or have problem, they are people near us that can help. So, make a good connection with neighbor. The good neighbors always give help to other neighbor, if you not in your home the neighbor will protect your home. That is some example for good neighbor.

Some people hope if they have home, they can get good neighbor. Why do people hope that? Because beside have a good home, quality your neighbor can make you comfort to stay in your home. Whatever, people around your home very determine your mood when you were at home.

Have A good neighbor is dream all people who can have home. But how to know a good neighbor? Can all people have good neighbor? Really, I can't answer that questions but may I give you illustration to answer your question.

Firstly, you can't discriminate people around your home. You can't judge people from what you see. You must to behave good for all people around you because if you good so the people around you will do this, likewise on the contrary.

Last, a good neighbor come alone if you have a good behavior with respect to all people. There is no people in the world want nearby with thug.

In conclusion, don't care how people to you but you must care your attitude to other people. The good person always get good person.