Ved972
Mar 30, 2014
Research Papers / Marijuana: Say Yes to the Plant [3]
Hello lizziehillier
Im using Essayforum for the first time and your thread drew my attention.
I found your essay good, but you may try to back it up with some more examples - any countries that have legalized marijuana and try to prove that they are economically and socially more stable - This might influence the reader. Unfortunately, people have been told that marijuana is not a good thing. Even if you tell them about its medicinal benefits, they might refuse to legalise it, because they have been told it's an illegal plant. You also referred that legalising it might lower crime rates, I agree with that, because nowadays there's no control on crime rate, though law is so strict.
If I would be the president of USA and I had read your essay, I think I might legalize it.
I like your essay :)
Hello lizziehillier
Im using Essayforum for the first time and your thread drew my attention.
I found your essay good, but you may try to back it up with some more examples - any countries that have legalized marijuana and try to prove that they are economically and socially more stable - This might influence the reader. Unfortunately, people have been told that marijuana is not a good thing. Even if you tell them about its medicinal benefits, they might refuse to legalise it, because they have been told it's an illegal plant. You also referred that legalising it might lower crime rates, I agree with that, because nowadays there's no control on crime rate, though law is so strict.
If I would be the president of USA and I had read your essay, I think I might legalize it.
I like your essay :)