Undergraduate / MIT essay, Boston; 'I do volunteering job in Boston with Arabs for Altruism' [9]

Never use slang while writing essays. It must be Mathematics and not Math.

Since my high school, I always aspired to become a researcher after I had read Richard J. Weiss's "Memoirs of a physicist". The analytical ability while solving problems has evoked interest in me to pursue a major in Mathematics. Also, I have a dream to start a Mathematics Institute for talented students in Saudi Arabia.

Writing Feedback / TOEFL iBT - Saving/Spending money [5]

In recent years, the majority of developed countries have a low saving rate because the people opt to spend their earnings immediately or they even take loans to finance their expenses.are spending more money and even taking credits to finance their expenses. . Due to uncertainty of future, in my opinion it is better to save money rather than spending.

Graduate / policy: all students taking same curriculum - isn't beneficial for the society [6]

The author is claim claims that all the students of a nation should follow a national curriculum. I agree with the author because a specified curriculum helps the students to make concrete decisions after they step out of the college. It will be easy for the administration to evaluate the performance of the students, if everyone follows a similar curriculum.