Writing Feedback / TOEFL: if you had money, which one do you prefer. buying a car or going vacation [3]

The decision either to go a vacation or buy a car differs from person to person. Some people prefer to buy a car and some poeple prefer to go to a vacation. In my point of view, going to a vacation is a better idea than purchasing a car because of several following reasons.

First, by traveling every one becomes more experienced. The point is, for forging a better future, everyone needs experience; as a result, traveling provide people with this opportunity to increase their experiences. Other than that, it is possible that during a trip, someone changes his or her mind to live another city or country. For instance, To me, before I traveled to The USA, I did not have any concrete information about this country; consequently, after my travel, everything was changed and I decided to immigrate to the USA.

Second, vacation is needed for everyone, based on psychologists. Tremendous confirmed studies show that, having at least one or two vacation is a year is strongly recommend for everyone, especially those people who work over time during the year. As a result, to have a happier life and more active life, it is essential to go on trip. To me, I personally nothing makes me more relaxed, but a long vacation.

Last but not the least, having and maintaining a car is costly. Put the fact that gas price is increasing day by day aside, insurance is on of the unavoidable imposed expenses that everyone must pay it. Moreover, the air pollution is one of the consequences of having car recently. For example, I personally pay lot of money every month for both insurance and parking every month.

To sum up, despite a few downsides of going to a vacation, it seems a better idea to go to a trip than to purchase a car.

Writing Feedback / Every movie made in a country can reflect some realities about that country [5]

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Every movie made in a particular country can reflect some of the realities about that country; indeed, we can understand valuable information during watching a movie. In my point of view, during watching a film we can figure out some information such as the country climate, culture and etc.

First, we can see the country culture and traditions. In fact, it is tremendously easy to find out about some aspects of cultural behaviors in a movie. For example, when we are watching a picture made in Iran, we can understand that the vast majority of people are Muslims because all of the women wear scarfs and also we can not see someone is drinking alcohol beverage in movie. A separation, a movie which is made in Iran and won Oscar reward, is a quintessential of Iranian culture.

Second, we can realize information about the country climate and weather. For example, when a movie is made in Africa we can understand that it is a tropical country and weather is extremely hot because the people and also characters in the movie wear thin cloths. Or we can see that the movie is directed near an ocean or beach; as a result, we can make sure that the country is near ocean. The movie Grey is a clear example for a movie made in Canada because it is always covered by snow even in summer.

Last but not least, we can see whether the country is rich or poor. Besides, we can see how developed are the people. For example, a movie made in the USA is most likely to reflect reality about a country which is rich. Moreover, the cars used in the movie and also the buildings, which we can see during filming, indicate the fact that the country is wealthy. A movie made in Newyork will show us skyfalls and modern cars ;consequently, we conclude that the people of that region are rich.

To sum up, one of the best ways to realize some aspects about a country is watching a movie made in that country. Brilliant information such as culture and climate and also how rich or poor is a country can be understood.