Writing Feedback / difference between boy's manner and gild's manner [5]

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can you give me some ideas about this topic:the different between boy's manner and gild's manner.
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Essays / "Growing up and self-improvement" essay - how can i write a topic? [7]

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my question about:"What do you think of growing up and self-improvement?"
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Essays / How can i decrible the graph [6]

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i have a test saturday.hower i am not sure my essay correct or not.i can not draw the graph.Please help me to correct it.thank you very much.

The graph shows the seasonalwater comsumption in millions of liltres in four towns(town A, town B, townC and town D)
As can be seen, in town A the water comsumption is quite high in summer ;then it decreases dramatically from summer to winter.Afterthat,there is a marked increase in spring.

The water consumption of townB fluctuates during four seasons but it is also highest in summer.
Among of towns ,town C keeps leading on the summer water comsumption .However it drops rapidly in autumn .It is on the sharp grownth in winter and reman unchanged in spring.

the same as other towns ,the town D`s water comsumption is qiuite high.From summer to winter ,there is a moderate decline.And then it rises steadily at the last stage of th year.