farshid_t
May 14, 2014
Writing Feedback / TOEFL; More important to work quickly& risk making mistakes [7]
Hi Eddies,
I appreciate for your attention.
I went to a TOEFL class in a very well-known English School in Iran. My teacher who has got 8.5/9 in IELTS in writing emphasizes that we should write 5 paragraphs. He believes Americans use 5 paragraphs too, because he had some American students who had said in U.S students are not familiar with 4 paragraphs essay and use 5 paragraphs essay.
We use 4 paragraphs essay for the time when question wants to compare two ideas or two statements. For example, what are advantages and disadvantages of smoking? In this essay, we write about
advantages in paragraph 2, disadvantages in paragraph 3, and our opinion in paragraph 4. Additionally, My friends in that school have got the best marks in writing task by 5 paragraphs essay even 30/30 in TOEFL.
I know that writing in 4 paragraphs is so easier than 5 paragraphs essay. But, I am following my teacher instruction. Besides, I have written the above writing in 30 minutes. I am trying to work on my essay to write with more Cohesion and Coherence.
If you have some observations, experiments or something like them which show students who write 4 paragraphs can gain more scores, could you please share it? If I convince that 4 paragraphs is better than 5 paragraphs in scores, I will change my method. We have studied several book for TOEFL one of the best one is "Oxford preparation Course for the TOEFL iBT Exam" which says we should write 4 paragraphs too!
Hi Eddies,
I appreciate for your attention.
I went to a TOEFL class in a very well-known English School in Iran. My teacher who has got 8.5/9 in IELTS in writing emphasizes that we should write 5 paragraphs. He believes Americans use 5 paragraphs too, because he had some American students who had said in U.S students are not familiar with 4 paragraphs essay and use 5 paragraphs essay.
We use 4 paragraphs essay for the time when question wants to compare two ideas or two statements. For example, what are advantages and disadvantages of smoking? In this essay, we write about
advantages in paragraph 2, disadvantages in paragraph 3, and our opinion in paragraph 4. Additionally, My friends in that school have got the best marks in writing task by 5 paragraphs essay even 30/30 in TOEFL.
I know that writing in 4 paragraphs is so easier than 5 paragraphs essay. But, I am following my teacher instruction. Besides, I have written the above writing in 30 minutes. I am trying to work on my essay to write with more Cohesion and Coherence.
If you have some observations, experiments or something like them which show students who write 4 paragraphs can gain more scores, could you please share it? If I convince that 4 paragraphs is better than 5 paragraphs in scores, I will change my method. We have studied several book for TOEFL one of the best one is "Oxford preparation Course for the TOEFL iBT Exam" which says we should write 4 paragraphs too!