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Aug 1, 2014
Writing Feedback / Studying in foreign university should be very helpful for everybody who does not afraid difficulties [4]
Hello dumi,
thanks for your comments and correction. I've rearranged the order of sentences and added a background sentence. What do you think now about my intro?
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In today's world, many young people wish to enter universities in hope of being successful in their life and some of them choose foreign universities for the same reason. Studying abroad students get some experience which is not only positive. This will be shown by analyzing advantages of an international diploma as well as experience in a foreign language and some disadvantages like separation with a family and difficulties of living abroad. I strongly agree that studying abroad has more merits rather than drawbacks.
Nowadays many students have the opportunity to study for part or all of their courses in foreign countries.
While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, many young people wish to enter universities to be successful in their life and some of them choose foreign universities. I strongly agree that studying abroad has more merits rather than drawbacks. This will be shown by analyzing advantages of an international diploma as well as experience in a foreign language and some disadvantages like separation with a family and difficulties of living abroad.
While studying abroad brings many benefits to individual students, it also has a number of disadvantages.
Do you agree or disagree?
In today's world, many young people wish to enter universities to be successful in their life and some of them choose foreign universities. I strongly agree that studying abroad has more merits rather than drawbacks. This will be shown by analyzing advantages of an international diploma as well as experience in a foreign language and some disadvantages like separation with a family and difficulties of living abroad.
Hello dumi,
thanks for your comments and correction. I've rearranged the order of sentences and added a background sentence. What do you think now about my intro?
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In today's world, many young people wish to enter universities in hope of being successful in their life and some of them choose foreign universities for the same reason. Studying abroad students get some experience which is not only positive. This will be shown by analyzing advantages of an international diploma as well as experience in a foreign language and some disadvantages like separation with a family and difficulties of living abroad. I strongly agree that studying abroad has more merits rather than drawbacks.