caroline123
Oct 19, 2014
caroline123
Oct 18, 2014
Writing Feedback / The Feeling Of My Father - The first one optimism was chosen [3]
The Feeling Of My Father
There were two things I have learned from my father.
The first one was chose optimism.In my memory,my father was a tough person who survived the tough times.He has done lots of job when he was young which made my thought he owned many experienes and stories.When I was a kid,he used to talk to me about some places where he has been to and never forgot to bring me a gift.For example,a model boat made of woods,a necklace a or a bag.Those accessories remained in my collecting box.He taught me that optimistic was not a luxury,it was a necessity.A few years ago,he was dinosed with cardiovascular disease .It got a little harder for him to take medicines everyday at the very beginning.I saw him struggle more and more,but he never complained about his struggle.He just woke up a little earlier and went jogging every morning until he got much better.He was grateful for what he had,my mom,my older brother and me.That`s optimism.
The second one was to be independent.My father was always looked immaculate.He deemed that keep clean and tidy was indispensable to cultivate good habits.Besides,I couldn`t rely on them all the time.I used to clean my room on my own.I felt appreciated that I remained deal with different situations on my own because of what he taught me.If I got into trouble,the most important things I need to do was not asking for his forgiveness.What I was supposed to do was find a solution and fix it until I have learned a lesson from the mess.Only in this way could I grow up.
In a whole,My father was the most important model in my life.I was raised with all I need,love,strong values.That`s a precious gift that only a father could give.
The Feeling Of My Father
There were two things I have learned from my father.
The first one was chose optimism.In my memory,my father was a tough person who survived the tough times.He has done lots of job when he was young which made my thought he owned many experienes and stories.When I was a kid,he used to talk to me about some places where he has been to and never forgot to bring me a gift.For example,a model boat made of woods,a necklace a or a bag.Those accessories remained in my collecting box.He taught me that optimistic was not a luxury,it was a necessity.A few years ago,he was dinosed with cardiovascular disease .It got a little harder for him to take medicines everyday at the very beginning.I saw him struggle more and more,but he never complained about his struggle.He just woke up a little earlier and went jogging every morning until he got much better.He was grateful for what he had,my mom,my older brother and me.That`s optimism.
The second one was to be independent.My father was always looked immaculate.He deemed that keep clean and tidy was indispensable to cultivate good habits.Besides,I couldn`t rely on them all the time.I used to clean my room on my own.I felt appreciated that I remained deal with different situations on my own because of what he taught me.If I got into trouble,the most important things I need to do was not asking for his forgiveness.What I was supposed to do was find a solution and fix it until I have learned a lesson from the mess.Only in this way could I grow up.
In a whole,My father was the most important model in my life.I was raised with all I need,love,strong values.That`s a precious gift that only a father could give.
