Posts by anees

anees

Dec 15, 2014

Scholarship / "Do not go where the path may lead, go instead where there is no path and leave a trail." [4]

United World College

its good as far as your personal concerns. but i'm sure you had struggled very hard to get that and this essay seems to have a missing element the reason of your struggle.

anees

Dec 13, 2014

Undergraduate / I strive to balance my identity between iPads and Cow Pies [4]

tehreem, your article is good written and draws a comparision between city and village life . but the way you have potrayed them through particular words that seems a bit imbalancing in your essay. instead of using the terms ipads and cow pies you can put more stress in the same way you have described their lifestyles as in last four lines of last paragraph.

anees

Aug 15, 2014

Undergraduate / "Do what makes you happy" - this is best piece of advice I have ever received [4]

Well written idea. But you can add in it the bane of not doing the work (that makes you happy) at the right time.

anees

Aug 15, 2014

Poetry / EVE OF MY SPOUSE'S DEATH [3]

Well, this poem is about a man whose wife has died as she was a habitual dragee eater that worsened her health as she was a diabetic. The poem has a dark humour telling about a husband who doesn't liked her wife as she was spendthrift and now he is also a diabetic but is confused whether to eat a dragee or not as he doen't want to die like her wife and is zealous for his life. "spouse" has been used here to convey the message that his wife wasn't a happy and beautiful thing for him as their relation may not be good.

anees

Aug 14, 2014

Poetry / EVE OF MY SPOUSE'S DEATH [3]

I pick, i toss,
scroll on roll,
think of that, but nothing said,
to eat it or not, really don't know,
it hounded me as i came near
and its really a humour,
when you will know 'bout her!
itsn't a big issue,but the hunger to eat,
has always pricked.
"oh! i'm addicted to you,
thou you ain't charming so,
and change the colours just like poppins do???
you ain't nothing much, just a small dragee...."
she also said!
but now, thank you...dragee,
i'm free from spending,
'cause she had sugar and you increased it,
and my good luck,
that she got a permanent house,
all covered with flowers around,
IN THE LOVING MEMORY OF....
...MY BEAUTIFUL SPOUSE!!!!