Saadhin
Aug 19, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS: 'opportunity to be healthier physically and mentally' - Children are given too much free time [4]
Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?
No one can deny the fact that childhood is the most important part of life. It is considered that, children would get more leisure hour than they need and school work would be more beneficial for them. However, from my point of view effective utilization of that period could help them to develop their mental and physical strength. I will express how the children can enjoy and benefit at the same time.
Sports and hobbies are the most interesting activities that children can do. Playing football, cricket, tennis or badminton makes the kid refresh and make him more healthy. Because he training and tuning his muscles by making some physical movements. In addition, drawing, reading or even watching television are good for mental health. These activities are improving the imagination of the students and make them more creative. And this will help them in their studying.
On the other hand, children can spend their free time to learn something different, which help them to develop their morality and self-confidence. They can contribute to social service and they can learn to take care of older and poor people. These works make them charge the responsibility. Another important activities are camping and ecotourism. In camping, children can learn to deal with rough life and difficult situations, they also learn how to be independence. And in ecotourism, they can learn more about environment and the history of some places. They could learn what is their role toward the environment.
According to above discussion it can be concluded that, free time is not only a great opportunity for children to be healthier physically and mentally, it also helps them to learn social and environmental skills.
Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?
No one can deny the fact that childhood is the most important part of life. It is considered that, children would get more leisure hour than they need and school work would be more beneficial for them. However, from my point of view effective utilization of that period could help them to develop their mental and physical strength. I will express how the children can enjoy and benefit at the same time.
Sports and hobbies are the most interesting activities that children can do. Playing football, cricket, tennis or badminton makes the kid refresh and make him more healthy. Because he training and tuning his muscles by making some physical movements. In addition, drawing, reading or even watching television are good for mental health. These activities are improving the imagination of the students and make them more creative. And this will help them in their studying.
On the other hand, children can spend their free time to learn something different, which help them to develop their morality and self-confidence. They can contribute to social service and they can learn to take care of older and poor people. These works make them charge the responsibility. Another important activities are camping and ecotourism. In camping, children can learn to deal with rough life and difficult situations, they also learn how to be independence. And in ecotourism, they can learn more about environment and the history of some places. They could learn what is their role toward the environment.
According to above discussion it can be concluded that, free time is not only a great opportunity for children to be healthier physically and mentally, it also helps them to learn social and environmental skills.
