Undergraduate / 'I wish to become a Lincesed Practical Nurse' - LPN entrance essay [10]

I have rewritten the essay and I would like some new in put on it. I hope this one says that I want to be a great nurse. I would appreciate some grammar help as well. thank you

Why I wish to become a nurse?
I wish to become a nurse for many reasons one of the biggest reasons I wish to become a nurse is so that I can feel the satisfaction, and challenge of knowing that I helped care for someone everyday and that they received the best possible care that I could provide as a nurse. I assisted in caring for my grandmother during her battle with cancer during that time I seen that the nurses are not just involved in providing care with medicine but also with compassion and understanding not only to the patient but also to their families.

Why do I believe that I would be a good nurse?
I believe that I would make a good nurse because I am understand the dedication and the commitment that it takes to be a nurse. I believe that I would make a good nurse because I am able to show empathy, and sympathy to every type of person. I believe that I will make a good nurse because I have a good understanding of what it takes to be a nurse after watching my mother work as a nurse my whole life and seeing the difference that she made in her patients lives.

What do you think your duties and responsibilities will be?
As a nurse I expect my duties to include proper care of patients. My duties would also be to provide proper safety to the patients I am caring for and also use the proper safety techniques taught during my training to become a nurse.

As a nurse I believe my responsibilities will be to know the rules and regulations of the facility I am employed. A nurse must also be able to follow directions given by the person in charge so that you can provide the best possible care to the patient. Must also be able to follow through with assignments to protect the care of the patients your caring for in order for them to return to daily life as soon as possible.

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Undergraduate / 'I wish to become a Lincesed Practical Nurse' - LPN entrance essay [10]

how would I show compassion in my essay.