ratnadjuwita
Aug 31, 2014
Writing Feedback / IELTS Task 2: What can be done to maintain biodiversity ? [6]
generally, i like your essay because you explain clearly in your developing sentence. Then, your flexical source is great especially for me as a new member here :D, i learn a lots from your essays.
however, i agree with vangiaspen about you forget to discuss what will you do as a person about the issues.
generally, i like your essay because you explain clearly in your developing sentence. Then, your flexical source is great especially for me as a new member here :D, i learn a lots from your essays.
however, i agree with vangiaspen about you forget to discuss what will you do as a person about the issues.