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Name: Basher you
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bashirmai   
Sep 9, 2014
Graduate / 'I decided to study in Germany' - Motivation Letter for Master Aeronautical [15]

Do you plan to live in Germany after you complete your masters program? yes for log term
2. Are you hoping to be employed in Germany after graduation? If yes, do you have any particular companies in mind where you wish to work? yes - airbus , air Berlin , Lufthansa or maintenance maintenance service companies.

3. How will working at those companies help you develop yourself in your craft?
4. What possible innovations and technological advancements do you hope to develop with the help of other German aeronautical engineers?
Working at the world's leading aircraft manufacturer means being part of a high-performance team where everyday you will exchange ideas and expertise with colleagues from different countries and nationalities, disciplines and backgrounds.

It is an opportunity to help design and manufacture the most eco-efficient, state-of-the-art aircraft. Push the boundaries of technology. Explore possibilities. Work in an environment where everyone has the same goal: to be the best they can possibly be.


5. Do you think you can accomplish these goals within 5 years of your masters completion? If so, then you have your 5 year (or more) career plan :-) yes
bashirmai   
Sep 8, 2014
Graduate / 'I decided to study in Germany' - Motivation Letter for Master Aeronautical [15]

kindly find last the revised :

Motivation Letter
Study Master of Mechanical Engineer

The aerospace industry is at the forefront of innovation, pushing the boundaries of technological advancement at an exponential rate. The design and manufacture of craft that can defy the limits of the world, or go beyond the decree of nature, is arguably the pinnacle of engineering in the world today.

I am writing to express my interest in applying for the master program of Aeronautical Engineering; I graduated with a bachelor's degree in Mechanical Engineering in the branch of Aeronautical Engineer 5 years ago at Aleppo University of Mechanical Engineer.

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bashirmai   
Sep 6, 2014
Graduate / 'I decided to study in Germany' - Motivation Letter for Master Aeronautical [15]

thanks for your reply and kindly find the below is its ok to pt in the first

The aerospace industry is at the forefront of innovation, pushing the boundaries of technological advancement at an exponential rate. The design and manufacture of craft that can defy the limits of our world, or go beyond the decree of nature, is arguably the pinnacle of engineering in the world today.

I have always sought to further my knowledge and understanding of how and why things work; to challenge the restraints of both modern pioneering and myself.
bashirmai   
Sep 4, 2014
Graduate / 'I decided to study in Germany' - Motivation Letter for Master Aeronautical [15]

kindly correct the following :

The aerospace industry is at the forefront of innovation, pushing the boundaries of technological advancement at an exponential rate. The design and manufacture of air crafts that can defy the limits of the world, or go beyond the decree of nature, is arguably the pinnacle of engineering in the world today.

That is the main reason that I am interested in pursuing an Aeronautical Engineering Masters degree after having completed my Bachelor's degree in Aeronautical Engineering 5 years ago at the Aleppo University of Mechanical Engineering.

My aim is to become a competent computational engineer who is qualified to work for international aeronautical engineering companies. Since Germany is known as the country at the forefront of aeronautical developments, it makes perfect sense for me to pursue my master's degree in the country that has universities best equipped to handle my masters training.

After some research, Germany turned out to be the best option for my studies since it offers the best economic advantage to families and students such as me and my family. Not only does the country present a conducive atmosphere for a growing family, but it also offers an academic and employment advantage to people of specific expertise such as me. I am already looking forward to the day when I will be qualified enough to work for the German Aerospace Center (DLR)

Having enumerated my reasons for choosing to study in Germany, I want to now explain the reasons why I am applying for acceptance to your university.

I came to know about your university through the DAAD course finder. I was impressed by the practical course curriculum and coursework. Another thing that pushed me to apply at your university was that its program designed for consecutive studies that make it ideal for my situation. Studying at your multicultural university will enables me to improve my interpersonal talents. I would be learning in one of the best universities in Europe.

I believe my educational qualifications and my experience are good enough to earn me a place in the master's program at your university. With such exemplary academic performances and scores, I believe I am the right candidate for in this program. Masters studies at your university will be challenging and at the same time interesting enough to help me overcome the odds of not only studying in a foreign institution but also living in an advanced society.

Working at the world's leading aircraft manufacturer and means being part of a high-performance team where every day you will exchange ideas and expertise with colleagues from different countries and nationalities, disciplines and backgrounds.

I am looking forward to graduating from your university and then undertaking an impressive career within the German aeronautical field over the next 5 years. I am looking forward to the opportunity to help design and manufacture the most eco-efficient, state-of-the-art aircraft. I will push the boundaries of technology with pioneering developments and designs by exploring all possibilities. I look forward to working with like minded engineers who will push to achieve the same goal: to be the best that we can be. I am hopeful that I will be able to work with Airbus, Air Berlin, or Lufthansa as part of my 5 year career development plan. Hopefully I will be accepted as an intern and then move on to a regular employee position at one of those companies thanks to the excellent training I will receive from your university.

I am positive that the university aeronautical engineering masters program will be an excellent start for an ambitious career person like me
Therefore, I would be so proud and happy if I received the admission for this program.
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