iamCynthia
Oct 29, 2014
Undergraduate / IELTS: satisfying working environment is far more important than the security of a job [4]
Ya I attented the test on 25th too!Generally I think the score of this passage would be high!
I think the part illustrating the importance of job security is good ! The idea is better than what i did .
But just as what vangiespen said the opinion should be better developed and I think you should include a comparation about the job satisfaction & Job securit, to explain which one is MORE IMPORTANT TO YOU and why.
Ya I attented the test on 25th too!Generally I think the score of this passage would be high!
I think the part illustrating the importance of job security is good ! The idea is better than what i did .
But just as what vangiespen said the opinion should be better developed and I think you should include a comparation about the job satisfaction & Job securit, to explain which one is MORE IMPORTANT TO YOU and why.
