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Nurba   
Nov 1, 2014
Graduate / Write about experience - Description about my Internship [13]

ok, thank you!)))

Also, I wrote to one of the Recruiting managers of that university and asked about which format will be better for Admission Office. He replied " I believe that in essay format would be best. You should then have more flexibility to mention how your work experience relates to skills and knowledge gained which make you suitable for the course you are applying to study."

Now, I do not know what to do)))
Nurba   
Oct 31, 2014
Graduate / Write about experience - Description about my Internship [13]

Vangiespen,
Since, I am a student yet, I do not have large amount of work experience. I completed only 2 internships, and the above one is the newest. Now, I am writing description about the second (previous) internship.

How do think the content of the above essay can be improved and do I properly addressed it?

P.S. Admission office told that I can use both essay format and listing format in order to give info about work experience.
Nurba   
Oct 31, 2014
Graduate / Write about experience - Description about my Internship [13]

Vangiespen,
How do find this one

On June 2013 I had an internship at Schlumberger in Aksai, Kazakhstan. I started my internship OFS (Oil Field Service) office where I had a chance to understand the importance of the safety and professional ethics issues of the company.

Afterwards, I was moved into the base of "Wireline" segment as a field engineer trainee where I worked with operators and field engineers. Due to lack of background in Petroleum Engineering I started from learning structure of the rock and well and the process of tanking the oil and from the rock. Further, my knowledge that I got on the courses of general engineering were helpful for me to understand the work principles of the equipments and tools. Also, I learned the processes of calibration, Fast Inspections of Tool, Tool Routine Inspection Monthly and Quality-Check.

Finally, I had an opportunity to visit and work on the field of Karachaganak Petroleum Operating Company to which Schlumberger provides its well services. During the field job our team did two runs for 258 rig. The first run was focused on the assessing the quality of the cement behind the column, whereas the second one was the determination of the corrosion of the column.
Nurba   
Oct 30, 2014
Graduate / Write about experience - Description about my Internship [13]

Hi Vangiespen,
Please give details of your current employment (if applicable) and any previous employment experience (with dates) that is relevant to your application. Please list your most recent post first. - It is what the committee requires.

Here is modified one

On June 2013 I had an internship on the position of Field Engineer trainee in 'Wireline' segment of Schlumberger in Aksai, Kazakhstan. First few days of my internship I passed in OFS (Oil Field Service) office where I had a chance to learn the basic policy of the company including the main business of the company, its strategy, the segments that it has etc. Afterwards, I had theoretical courses on safety policy of the company that called Schlumberger Injury Prevention Program (SIPP) and showed it on my practice. During these courses I discerned that the several techniques used in prevention of injuries on the work could be very useful in our everyday life and I understand the importance of the safety and professional ethics issues.

After, successful completing of the courses I moved to the base, where initially I was directed to the operators in order to work with them. When I worked with them I learned how the tools and equipments are called and their basic construction. Further I learned the way of preparation of the tools and equipments for the field job and it was very interesting that Schlumberger has a database that is called RITE, where all required information about any tool and device exist. Moreover, I have learned the processes of how Fast Inspections of Tool, Tool Routine Inspection Monthly and Quality-Check are done.

Then, I was involved into the calibration of the basic devices and tools. During these activities I also tried to get some knowledge about their application, the theoretical explanation of their mechanism. my knowledge that I have got on the classes of the general engineering such as Sensors and Actuator, Control Engineering, Fluid Mechanics, Thermodynamics etc. were helpful for me to understand the work principles of the those equipments and tools.

Despite the fact that a position of field engineer in Wireline segment is pretty narrowly profiled and more related to the geology and geophysics, I could an opportunity to get familiarized about the the basics of Petroleum Engineering, especially Upstream. One of the most interesting parts of my internship at Schlumberger was the visiting the field and making operations there. Due to this I passed H2S courses at special training centre. At the courses I got familiarized with prevention techniques during the accident related with H2S and learned how to use 'breathing apparatus'. After completion of the courses our team was directed to the 258 rig of Karachaganak Petroleum Operating Company in order to do two runs. On the first run the DSLT (Digitizing Sonic Login Tool) with its telemetry and sonde was used that showed the quality of the cement behind the column. However, on the second run we used the PMIT (Production Multifinger Imaging Tool) with its telemetry that is good for determination of the corrosion of the column. On the field my main function was to help operators to do rig up and carry the tools from the 'Wireline' station to the rig. Also I had a chance to observe the real engineer's work on the field. During the whole period of my internship the good communication skills that I have gained during my classes at the university were very helpful for me, because I could easily work in team and communicate with its members.

Finally, my presentation skills that I have improved and huge amount of practices in making presentation at university were helpful during preparation of my final presentation, which was about the Ultra-Sonic Imagining Tool, where I explained the main functions and mechanism of it, how the tool works and answered to the numerous questions of my mentor and other engineers.

Guys, I will be very thankful for any feedback!
Nurba   
Oct 29, 2014
Graduate / Write about experience - Description about my Internship [13]

Hi! I am applying to Graduate Program (Petroleum Eng) and they are asking to write about my experience (employment, internship etc). I will be very thankful if you give any feedback and help.

On June 2013 I had an internship on the position of Field Engineer trainee in 'Wireline' segment of Schlumberger in Aksai, Kazakhstan. First of all I introduced and learned the basic policy of the company including the main business of the company, its strategy, the segments that it has etc. Afterwards, I had theoretical courses on safety policy of the company that called Schlumberger Injury Prevention Program (SIPP) and showed it on my practice. This program is required in order to work on base.

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