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Name: Anindita Dasgupta
Joined: Nov 2, 2014
Last Post: Dec 27, 2014
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From: India
School: Carmel High School

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gia   
Dec 25, 2014
Undergraduate / "Immodest words admit of no defense, for want of modesty is want of sense!"; Favorite Books, Poems.. [3]

Share with us a few of your favorite books, poems, authors, films, plays, pieces of music, musicians, performers, paintings, artists, blogs, magazines, or newspapers. Feel free to touch on one, some, or all of the categories listed, or add a category of your own.

With my red face on, I walked straight to her and let out my voice "Immodest words admit of no defense, for want of modesty is want of sense!" Waves of bubble heads burst out in laughing. My classmates were not laughing at me, but at her, at her childlike and imprudent ways. Being the head of the Casting Department at the Dramatics Club of our school, my job was, obvious, of searching and appointing passionate actors. As the name goes, few people even do not refrain from casting a few accusations on me. They are as follows: 'you rejected, coz you dislike me, coz I'm a superior actor than you; coz you fear I might seize your place', and blah blah! Nevertheless, my job remains with the same dedication and honesty.

Matters between us were cordial, until her infamous outburst during one of our play rehearsals .She is one of the best actors our school has, however the situation changed when fresh actors emerged from the junior batches and when I selected one of them over her, for our Annual Dramatics Festival. Though, I made her understand that it's time to allow the juniors to showcase their talents, this didn't go down well with her and resulted in lashing of immodest words for the junior, from her side.

High responsibilities bring with them immense expectations; yes cliché, although to deal with them during each plays and skits, is not a cliché factor, since every time I meet up an innovative personality to work with and understand, off course. My job does not terminate with making rejections, but begins with making every participant realize their strengths and work further on them compared to the weaknesses. During this process, unknowingly, we together develop from our own weaknesses. This is a trick, a moral trick. You should to be thinking that I'm some sort of preacher or lecturer. Well, the thoughts are arising from an author and his life story. He taught me these tactics of making others and oneself learn easily. He told that one should be taught as if you taught them not, and things unknown proposed as things forgot. And this is what I have done since I read this book, his autobiography. I have implemented his wisdom, not only in casting process but in my real life too. Talking with regard to her, I conveyed his teachings of modesty and sensibility to her also.

This book has imparted values that no other could till now, and engraved in my heart the values of respecting universal thoughts and opinions. That is why this is my favorite book- The Autobiography of Benjamin Franklin.
gia   
Dec 15, 2014
Undergraduate / Carleton is powered my wind turbines. What empowers you? supplement essay [4]

Carleton is powered my wind turbines. What empowers you?

"Smile, an everlasting smile
A smile can bring you near to me"


It brightens up, for cheering me when I'm sad. It sings with me when I'm ecstatic. It accompanies in my daily work load, and it is the most potent magic wand I possess. It is my smile. I'm powered by a simple bright smile. Starting my day by looking at the mirror with a wide rabbit teeth smile, is what empowers me throughout the day. Remarkably, I begin to feel further love and support in all areas of my life as it signifies positive attitude, happiness and agreement. Even a smile from the other end infuses me with a certain level of confidence and added energy. At Carleton, I hope to transmit the same waves of positive energy across the community and I believe that there should be no exception, hence do me a favor, and Smile please!
gia   
Dec 12, 2014
Undergraduate / Apart from studies, University of Pennsylvania has abundance of sources and activities to explore [19]

I have incorporated your suggestions..have a look and see if its ready for submission.

Stephen Hawking has said that the potential for human benefit from super artificial intelligence will be huge, but could come at a debilitating cost to the human race. I believe that is not the case. I know that super AI has the ability to continuously benefit mankind provided we learn how to harness and control its power. My aim is to create "intelligent" neural networks and organs. Although commonplace now, artificial organs do not have the same life span and human control factors as their biological counterparts. I believe that such artificial intelligence based organs can be created and I hope to be a pioneer in the field through the support of UPenn, its mentors, and scientific laboratories.

In order to accomplish my goal, I am looking to the foundation that the Computer and Cognitive Science AI program that UPenn offers its students. I hope to fully grasp the meaning and world of artificial intelligence through the study of Psychology, Linguistics, Philosophy, and Neuroscience. Hopefully, I will also be given a chance to do an independent study and interdisciplinary research through the GRASP lab, IRCS, and PICS. With the help of the CURF and other fellowship programs, I will only succeed in this mission.

Thanks to the varied extra curricular activities offered at UPenn, I know that I will also develop my social skills in relation to my academic requirements. By participating at PennRec, I hope to participate in several activities and also establish a few other activities and clubs such as a skate club that introduces the rudiments of inline, quad, and skateboarding, which I am sure the student community will enjoy immensely.

From rich collaborations like Penn Classics and The One Acts Festival to carnivals like Spring Fling, It is the place where I want to be. It is the university campus, where I aspire to widen my real capabilities and attain accomplishments, where I want to gain quality education and life experiences. Where I want to develop lifelong relations and call myself a proud Quaker!
gia   
Dec 11, 2014
Undergraduate / Apart from studies, University of Pennsylvania has abundance of sources and activities to explore [19]

Here is the full essay..

Stephen Hawking said that the potential benefits of super intelligent AI are huge. It would be the biggest event, but might also be the last, unless we learn how to avoid the risks. However, I believe that it's not the last, as AI has innumerable inventions and benefits to provide. I feel a need to prove the highly significant role it plays in our growth.

My aim is to build artificial but "intelligent" neural network and organs. Artificial organs are a commonplace now, but do not posses enough life span and self-controllability similar to the real ones.

The Computer and Cognitive science: AI program is the optimal course for me. There I can learn the varied concepts of Intelligence ranging from Psychology, Linguistics, Philosophy, and Neuroscience. With Penn's independent study and interdisciplinary research at GRASP lab, IRCS and PICS, I can acquire knowledge in all interested subjects. Even the CURF and other fellowship programs are a boon to support my research explorations. During summers too, the study opportunities at Ulsan National Institute or Aachen University will let me embrace distinct culture and diversity with hands-on research experiences.

Penn Network Visualization is the ideal place to start an advanced project on building neural networks and organs by mixing artistic visuals, biological sightings and technology from the students of humanities, medicine and science at UPenn respectively. Furthermore, we can publish our innovations into the corporal world by transferring our discoveries into commercial products, startup companies and services with the help of Penn Center for Innovation.
gia   
Dec 8, 2014
Undergraduate / I learned the sport all by myself - Skating - Extracurricular Activities essay [13]

There are two versions...have a look.

Version 1

Left leg first, imagine your right leg on an "S", start from the tail, draw the symbol and push yourself. Left leg and an 'S' with your right.

Still in pain from the last night bruises, I put my legs on the cold metal plates and moved ahead. Not to fall, but glide against the striking winds. Yes, I could finally ice skate! I started skating from my first grade when I noticed two mysterious shoes with wheels, hanging in a store. Having no one to coach me, I learned the sport all by myself. Friends laugh at my 'S' method, but I'm proud that I discovered my style through experience and persisted till the end. I learned to evolve myself with time, and the lessons I may not have achieved though professional teaching. It provided me with true confidence to lead my own way and define my uniqueness.

Version 2

With leadership come high responsibilities and I too had my share. I was appointed as the Casting Department head at the Dramatics Club of my high school. The job was obvious, of selecting performers for each plays to be held. At this position some people persuade you, friends give their emotional sad look and even criticism, but my job is to select the ones who are dedicated and not just eager to be famous. Once, I had to choose between a close friend of mine and a senior. The former wanting to be famous and the later passionate about her work. Though, the senior was difficult to work with and adjust to, I had to be wise the select her, which made me understanding to universal opinions and thoughts. Although, that 'close' friend is only a 'friend' now, as I was very rude (according to her), the episode developed my decision making skills and made me more responsible towards my work.
gia   
Dec 8, 2014
Undergraduate / Apart from studies, University of Pennsylvania has abundance of sources and activities to explore [19]

This is the second version. Only the intro is changed.

The World's abuzz with its inventions. Still, some are against human's reliance over it, some are concerned about being ethically wrong to replicate God gifted intelligence and some fear of human eradication. However, I believe that AI has innumerable inventions and benefits to provide. And I feel a need to prove the highly significant role it plays in our growth.

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gia   
Dec 7, 2014
Undergraduate / Apart from studies, University of Pennsylvania has abundance of sources and activities to explore [19]

I have tried your advice, but am not sure if it sounds good.

Stephen Hawking said once,that the potential benefits of super intelligent AI are huge. It would be the biggest event, but might also be the last, unless we learn how to avoid the risks. However, I believe that it's not the last, as AI has innumerable inventions and benefits to provide. I feel a need to prove the highly significant role it plays in our growth.

My aim is to build artificial but "intelligent" neural network and organs.
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gia   
Dec 6, 2014
Undergraduate / I learned the sport all by myself - Skating - Extracurricular Activities essay [13]

Briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences.(150)

Left leg first, imagine your right leg on an "S", start from the tail, draw the symbol and push yourself. Left leg and an 'S' with your right.

Still in pain from the last night bruises, I put my legs on the cold metal plates, in the early winter morning, and moved ahead. Not to fall, but glide against the striking winds. Yes, I could finally skate! I started skating from my first grade when I noticed two mysterious shoes with wheels, hanging in a store. After continuous spills and toppling over for weeks, I learned the sport all by myself. I don't know how this 'S' method came into being, but I'm proud that I designed my style. Friends say it's not the correct method. But who cares? Until I beat them in races. Until it makes me feel like a bird.
gia   
Dec 5, 2014
Undergraduate / Untranslatable meanings of special words - UChicago Supplement [4]

In French, there is no difference between "conscience" and "consciousness." In Japanese, there is a word that specifically refers to the splittable wooden chopsticks you get at restaurants. The German word "fremdschämen" encapsulates the feeling you get when you're embarrassed on behalf of someone else. All of these require explanation in order to properly communicate their meaning, and are, to varying degrees, untranslatable. Choose a word, tell us what it means, and then explain why it cannot (or should not) be translated from its original language.

In the northern realm of the country, it is known as 'Gol Gappa', whereas the denizens of the western frontier call it 'Pani Puri'. The Sultans of the medieval era called it 'Paani Ke Batashe' and the people in the south-eastern call it 'Gup Chup'. But, "Phuchka", as we call it here, can be regarded as a staple evening snack for the Kolkatans. And when it comes to street food, Phuchka is the indisputable leader.

A deep fried and crisp hollow sphere stuffed with a delicious mix of mashed potatoes and served with a hard hitting tangy sensation of pickled tamarind water, is as much a treat to the eyes as they are to the mouth. And the name "Phuchka" is the only word representing this particular recipe, because the rest of the eleven names it has imply different 'Pani' (water) and 'Puri' (stuffing) across India. Having grown up in various cities, I have tried and tasted all the twelve different recipes and styles, but none comes close to the one made in my city-Kolkata.

Phuchka has its name from the bursting sound "Phuch" when it is eaten (Indeed!).The originality of its taste and name goes deep down in our Bengali culture roots. The word represents Kolkata's likeness for tangy and over spicy food choice. It carries emotions of thousands of people of the city and definitely would not prefer its name to be translated. What if tomorrow you are asked to change your official name? Yes, there comes a void. That's what the power of a name is.

For foreigners in India, especially in Kolkata, the name Phuchka can seem more difficult to chew than the dish itself. However, for their convenience, some sellers have even gone far trying to translate it in English. Then comes what? "Watery Breads" and "Crisp Spheres"! The name Phuchka itself invades our senses with its aroma, even before we dig into it. However, 'bread' or 'sphere' surely can't wet your taste buds when away from it. Instead, it leads the unknowns to believing that it is bread which needs to be dipped in spicy tamarind water and eaten. Oh, please! (Let's not try the translation again).

The name Phuchka makes us long for some bite, even if we just finished our lunch. It signifies our search for the best "Phuchka Walla" (seller) in our locality. It signifies the food gathering (gossips) we have around the stall. It signifies the debate we have with strangers around the stall about the correct amount of chickpeas or chilies the Phuchka Walla should have used, and the always asking for extra free bites. It signifies that blissful moment when I put the first piece in my mouth (ask an Indian). Nothing lifts my mood than screaming "Phuchkaaaa", when suggesting a quick hang out with friends. And this name sounds hundred times delicious and better than Watery Breads.

However, all these points about Phuchka have made me crave for some and I need to run to my nearest Phuchka Walla now!
gia   
Dec 5, 2014
Undergraduate / Apart from studies, University of Pennsylvania has abundance of sources and activities to explore [19]

Here is my new draft...

His bright red eyes, his ruminations, his tricks and smartness are what have been fascinating me since I first caught sight of him. He is my hero, he is the "foolproof and incapable of error" HAL 9000. An inspiration from where I developed my interests in Computers, AI, and the human brain. Agreed, there have been numerous inventions like him, but none innate with all his almost human emotions and perceptions. But wait, he is a lethal discovery of AI. The field of study which will eliminate the humankind in the near future.

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gia   
Dec 4, 2014
Undergraduate / Apart from studies, University of Pennsylvania has abundance of sources and activities to explore [19]

The admission committee would like to learn why you are a good fit for your undergraduate school choice. Please tell us about specific academic , service, and research opportunities at the University of Penn that resonate with your background, interests and goals.

His bright red eyes, his ruminations, his tricks and smartness are what have been fascinating me since I first saw him. He is my hero, he is the "foolproof and incapable of error" HAL 9000. An inspiration from where I developed my interests in Computers, AI, and the human brain. Agreed, there have been numerous inventions like him, but none innate with all his almost human emotions and perceptions. But wait, he is a lethal discovery of AI. The field of study which will eliminate the humankind in the near future.

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gia   
Nov 30, 2014
Writing Feedback / Dream, the only harmless drug in the world - gap year explanation [14]

I have made some changes, and presented it in a new angle. Though, I have not mentioned any reason for taking up gap year. Would you mind helping me with that?.

Raising my voice I said," stop talking and listen everybody", Whispers continuing. Suddenly a co-worker advised, "If you want kids to listen, lower your voice instead of raising it. Whisper, 'If you can hear me, touch your nose'. I did exactly what he said, and was taken aback by the kids' response!

My gap year started off by teaching slum girls at a local school. Our first task was convincing and inviting girls from different slum areas of our city. Definitely, this wasn't a smooth task. Their parents, aware of their futile future, devoid of hope were reluctant to let their daughters study rather than work as maids or marry in their early teens.

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gia   
Nov 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / Dream, the only harmless drug in the world - gap year explanation [14]

thanks Louisa , it was really encouraging!...btw I had a two week session at a school teaching for slum girls.Do you think I should add that and then talk about how i got inspiration from those slum girls for my SAT preps? would that be effective?
gia   
Nov 20, 2014
Writing Feedback / Dream, the only harmless drug in the world - gap year explanation [14]

thanks Louisa for the feedback.Honestly speaking, since I graduated in late July, I didn't had much time to join Volunteering as i had to catch up with my SATs. However, i'll be volunteering for SMILE(NGO) from 10th DEC.
gia   
Nov 19, 2014
Writing Feedback / Dream, the only harmless drug in the world - gap year explanation [14]

Hi, this is my gap year explanation essay.Apart from the grammatical mistakes , i'm quite concerned with the last para.Any suggestions, critiques are welcomed. Help!

Dream, the only harmless drug in the world. We may have an overdose, though the hangover needs to be controlled with passion, determination and conviction. I dreamt of studying in the US.

Having attended a 9 to 4 school and other tutorial classes, my high school days were spent remaining outside for almost twelve hours a day. Only after graduation, I realized that four crucial years of my life were spent in-studying for school, for tuitions, and state and national levels. When results were declared, I was shocked and had no words to describe my grief. It took me days to swallow the fact that the girl, once who scored A's and who was famous for her computer programming has failed to secure a place in a government college.

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gia   
Nov 3, 2014
Undergraduate / I frequently find myself to be a very Yujyufudan person - essay elaborating on 'My biggest flaw' [6]

Hey Kristy, even I think so.It's more like your strong attribute than a flaw(as u explained).However, its up to you to decide.

Japanese is said to be one of the most difficult languages for English speakers to learn, and I have experienced that first-hand
Not required in this essay.

I began learning Japanese over five years ago, and I have become fluent now; nevertheless, I am still discovering new aspects of the language in different situations and nuances.

What is the limit?
gia   
Nov 3, 2014
Graduate / "ability to make decisions" and "ability to communicate" - fundamental qualities of Human being [4]

My childhood, I would say, was not bad . It helped me to grow up. I stayed out of trouble . I suffer from partial deafness.

these lines are not necessary.

I scored 96 and 99 percentile in GATE in pre-final and final year respectively
I assume they will have your GATE results so no need to specify it in the SOP.

Ambition is path to success. I believe in voice that says "you can run a little faster ", "you can throw a little harder ", "you can dive a little deeper" and, for you, the laws of physics are merely a suggestion

you can rephrase it in a better way.

For further comments, you need to provide a new revised draft.
Hope i was helpful.all the best.
Btw, what is the limit?
gia   
Nov 3, 2014
Graduate / "Bolashak" - My wish to study at Britain [10]

If the limit is 300, then no.
However, you can to lot more better than this..only submit it when you are very confident.Moreover, i'm an undergrad aspirant just trying to help. don't take my comments harshly..all the best.
gia   
Nov 3, 2014
Graduate / "ability to make decisions" and "ability to communicate" - fundamental qualities of Human being [4]

Hi Arpit, though i'm an undergrad but still i'll like to suggest something.

try to organize the SOP, like first talk about your hearing problems/background, then what inspired you to take Computer and then talk about your work at Cisco.

As a hobby, I worked for NGO "Youth for Sewa" where I helped unprivileged children to learn & speak English and acquire self-confidence.

Dont say hobby, try to use more kind words.

Hope this helps..:)
gia   
Nov 3, 2014
Graduate / "Bolashak" - My wish to study at Britain [10]

Since last year, I started to look through universities, programs, but no one of it, I did not like the program "Bolashak".

Its not clear what you want to say.Again, you said you did not like the program Bolashak and then you are taking about its advantages

I want my citizens of my country to have the opportunity to develop new ways of solving problems, it will reduce the burden of my country and help become one of the best countries in the world

I want the citizens of my country to have the opportunity for developing new ways of solving problems as it will reduce the burden of my country and help it become one of the best in the world.

I already have some ideas that will bring positive results to my country

what are the ideas? try to share some.
what is the word limit?

But furthermore I would like to share my ideas, experiences among like-minded people from all the world.

try this out,hope this helps..all the best..:)

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