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'the biggest failure in culture revolution in history' - Mao Zedong essay thesis.

Essay question: To what extent was Mao Zedong good or bad for china
I'm choosing to go with bad
i really suck at making thesis statements and was wondering if anyone could help me out
"Mao Zedong's un-strategic projects and economic statistics caused one of the biggest failure in culture revolution in history, causing death tolls of about forty million, famines that dwarfed other previous recorded famines, and little to no change"

any help, tips and feedback would be greatly appreciated