Writing Feedback / EssaySome movies are serious,other movies are amuse and entertain.Which type of movie do you prefer? [2]

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Some movies are serious, designed to make the audience think. Other movies are designed primarily to amuse and entertain. Which type of movie do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

There are different kinds of movies, everyone is prefer to watch specific movies. I prefer to watch serious movies like; scientific, social, and which based on true stories. I think that serious movies have many effects on audience , serious movies pull them for watching for many reasons.

One of the reasons is, scientific movies allow people to use their mind to think with what is going on in movie by throwing a mysterious idea that make others wonder what will happen in the end and make them interesting. For me ,I like to watch" Sherlock Holmes" Movies because it let me know how to think and use my skills to analyze and solve the problems.

Another reason is that a lot of serious movies are depend on true stories or stories quoted from life. People enjoy to watch movies which talk on other's life , knowing what happened to them and how their life were. Also they like to watch movie which express theirs life and talk about problems which faced them. For example, I like to watch movies about "World War" ,because those movies describe interest details about war.

People are attract to watch movies which can effect on their feeling. serious movies include a lot of strong different passion. This passion has the power to effect on the audience, it is working on move the passion inside everyone .For example, when I went to cinema to watch "Titanic" movie , I noticed that, a lot of audience were excited and motivation about the story.

Finally, movies was create for entertainment people. I prefer to watch serious movies which allow me to know new info about others, show me life how it was by different time and give me strong motivation to complete my life.

Writing Feedback / Beauty isn't the most important, but inner beauty is - judging by external appearances [2]

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? One should never judge a person by external appearances.

I agree that, one should never judge a person by external appearances for a number of reasons .
The first and probably the most important one is, external appearances don't express on personality of person. There are a lot of people have completely different external appearances don't express on their personality. For example, you may lose chances to make friendships with new friends if you judgment from their external appearances instead on knowing their interest and keep you away from make good friendships.

Another reason is, there are many people special guys who like to change their external appearances from time to other. They think that, changing is good and to change your external appearances by following both new fashion and style. For that we can't judge on them by their external appearances.

Last but not least, there are many people who judge on other persons by their look or sort them by their wealth. I think the real beautiful is inside our heart and wealth isn't a measure to judge on others. For instance, there are poor people who have a normal look but they are gentle and very nice.

Finally, I think that , beauty isn't the most important, but inner beauty is. we can learn how to judge others in a positive way based on their behavior and personalities.