Undergraduate / NYU. A reality come true or just a dream school?- Help on my NYU supplement [5]

Being atIn the heart of New York City, NYU cannot be compared to any other university since it attracts so many young, ambitious and aspiring adults from countless diverse backgrounds . As a first generation American-born Chinese, my goal is to become the bridge between young immigrants and the American society throughin the medical field. Many times Often, immigrants lack the medical attention they need either because they don't fully understand how our country works or because theyjust simply lack the resources to seek help.

NYU can help me achieve this goal through theirits reputable academic research facilities as well as theirits strong connections with the real worldglobal connections . In the morning I could be attending a lecture about the anatomy of the human body, but later in the afternoon, I could be in an internship at a local hospital. I canwould be able to see first hand how doctors with my own eyes, and how nurses apply what I will be learning; ways to save people's lives. NYU's Shanghai campus is also great way for me to furtherexpand my ambitions by developing a deeper connection with my Chinese culture through the Study Abroad Program. BeingIn a rising city in the global economy and largest in terms of population (Change the language hear. Try to make it more concise and straight to the point. be careful with verb tense and agreement.) , NYU's Shanghai campus is full of opportunities and discoveries that no other university can provide.

As a student, my most promising traits are my determination and persistence. Hours and hours spent running on the track running taught me that progress comes through persistence and determination. When I first tried out for my school's track team during my freshmen year, I could barely finish the mile that was required to make the team. I was denied a spot on the team. I trained every day for the entire summer and when tryouts took place again the next year my training paid off and I was offered a spot on the team.

My determination and persistence will inspire those around me to work harder and achieve their goals. I have learned that it takes practice to excel, and passion to exceed. As an NYU student, no obstacle will stand in my way when I put my mind to it.