Writing Feedback / Modern parents should spend more times with their children and care for mutual communication. [3]

"Most of modern family in today daily have parents are got stuck in their own business ,one of the most popular cause that make children get hard to communicate with them.Children are innocent,they usually need their parents's training lessons.By talking with parents,sharing emotions and put their trust in parents,children will easily to keep up with school life.That is why communicating with parents is important to a happiness family.But in fact,parents who both work long hours per day, struggled with making money are usually get tired after work.When they come back home, they have inadvertently or deliberately forgotten to care about their children and was looking for a private place to relax.To solve this problem,governments and competent authorities have advised people to pay more of their attention to childrens,rather than taking them to the classroom of communication, life skills, or diferents clubs.Which might get easy to make them confused or worse to develop bad habits without the correct leading."

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