Essays / How do I write a patent claim for this? [2]

For example , A device will send a signal to the main control room when there is a lack of item in the room?

Essays / How do I improve this sentence? - For a report on how the tourism industry is defined in Japan. [4]

I need to include these things in my report (introduction) how is tourism industry is defined in japan , how it is being managed by the people in Japan and how it is politicised. as well as the challenges and issue faced. I will also need to include a solution.

This report will first explain how tourism industry is defined in japan. Subsequently , it will explain it how it is being managed and politicized in japan. Lastly , this paper will talk about the challenges and issue faced together with solution to solve this problem.