Scholarship / As a petroleum engineer, I will be able to contribute on meeting mankind's energy needs [2]

Hello Dear
I am assuming that this post is to get a feedback on your post. There are a few things which I would like to highlight:

1. Spelling Mistakes, Grammatical Errors (Consider Proof Reading your entry), you can also consider removing unnecessary adjectives
2. Please be more specific about your interest, at the moment, the response has many directions and might end up confusing the reader.
Hence, keep it simple, short and straightforward and proof-read
Your ideas and enthusiasm towards this course is indeed remarkable and wish you luck for your future endeavours.

Undergraduate / Embrace anything and everything - even unexpected [2]

Hello Dear,
I would like to take the opportunity to provide you feedback on your answer. First of all, your response is not bad at all. The only thing that you can do here in order to make this more convincing is to be a little more specific. As an example, may be, you can identify more than one strengths and then choose the one that is a most likely fit. One's strength is essentially virtues like honesty, patience, determination, etc. An identification of such qualities lacks in your response. Your response can stand out if you can identify some of your real qualities that act as a strength for you. The answer to the second half will follow from what qualities you have identified as your strength. As a suggestion, you can relate those qualities (identified strengths) with what you anticipate in the course and hence you will answer how will that strength help you succeed in the program. Hope that helps.

Best
Budhesh Chopra