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aelsp

Mar 10, 2015

Scholarship / Every single element in this world has a role. Scholarship, Self introduction essay. [3]

Thank you so much for your help!
I'm still working on...

Could you tell me if the next sentence sounds arrogant? or is okay to keep it? (I am really wondering because show emotions in english is quite different than in my mother language, and I want to keep an humble text)

- My ambition made me to be one of the recognized students of my school generation.

Thank you so much!

aelsp

Mar 9, 2015

Scholarship / Every single element in this world has a role. Scholarship, Self introduction essay. [3]

Hi everyone, im going to apply for the KGSP.

Next are the topics to include in the self introduction:

- Your course of life, your view of life, study background, your hopes & wishes, etc
- Your education and work experience, etc., in relation to the KGSP program
- Your motivations for applying for this program
- Reason for study in Korea

Please help me correcting and giving feedback.
Any help gratefully appreciated. Blessings!
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Every single element in this world has a role. However, humans can decide which one take as their own. I grew up in a small town, shaped by the values of my family and school. Those made of me an open-minded as well as persistent person, who understands that life give us challenges to overcome with positivism and patience. I studied 13 years of my life since I was 3 years old in the town's Public school directed by Franciscan Missionaries of Maria Sisters; they lead students into the teaching life, planting their vision of protecting the nature and environment.

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