Writing Feedback / Fast food taxation as the method to reduce obesity among people. [4]

To solve this problem, I would argue that governments play an important role to impose a higher tax on this kind of food, and people should realize the bad effect of consuming too much fast food.

The predominant reason of this problem is eating unhealthy food that contains chemicals, saturated fats, and sodium.
For example, people who prefer consuming fast food such as fried chicken at McDonalds are more likely to get sick easily in the future which is resulted by chemical influence . As a consequence, there is no doubt that eating much fast food will suffer the number of people cause health problems.

Grammar, Usage / My parents are almost alike [7]

You need to correct some spelling errors. In the first sentence, the word should spelled "you". In the third sentence, the word should be spelled "found". The last sentence isn't clear, so you should remove it.

Grammar, Usage / Heartbroken and in a state of deep shock [6]

"Heartbroken and in a state of deep shock" means that someone is profoundly sad and very surprised and upset.