jenny188
Apr 22, 2015
Writing Feedback / The government should spend money on public services, but investment in the arts is not unnecessary [3]
"Alternative way to say last two sentence" While I agree that the government should rather spend money on public services than on art stuffs ; such as music and theatre
Thanks @humangun for your suggestion, but I think your alternative introduction is not reflected my point and linked with the body content.
"Alternative way to say last two sentence" While I agree that the government should rather spend money on public services than on art stuffs ; such as music and theatre
Thanks @humangun for your suggestion, but I think your alternative introduction is not reflected my point and linked with the body content.