Writing Feedback / The information on post-graduate qualifications in Australia by different gender in 1999 [4]

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The provided bar chart displays information on post-graduate qualifications in Australia by different gender in 1999. Generally speaking, there were over 50% males with the highest degrees or diplomas and paradoxically held the lowest levels of qualifications. Females were almost constituted of the middle levels on educations.

The first can be observed that the skilled vocational diploma was significantly accounted for 90% of men and only 10% of women. Furthermore, males were constituted of 60% of post-school diploma and 70% of master degree while females were made up 30-40% of the two populations. By contrast, women held 50% of bachelor degree and 70% of undergraduate diploma, which were higher than men, possessed 45% and 35% respectively.

In sum, it's easy to see that a greater percentage of males had higher levels on education comparing with females, especially in expertise vocational diploma. Females were accounted for middle-tier diplomas and degrees in average.

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