Posts by vidya200675

vidya200675

May 4, 2015

Writing Feedback / Excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects writing and reading skills [5]

Thank you so much for your corrections and valuable suggestions!! Since IELTS is looking for some high end vocabulary, i have incorporated them wherever it is feasible. Kindly suggest ways to improve the vocabulary too... Once again, thank you so much your help...

vidya200675

May 4, 2015

Letters / Waiter position - job application letter General Writing IELTS TASK 1 [4]

Just be careful about the sentence formation and generally no personal details are provided in the job application mail. Please practice writing by learning new words and grammatical structures.Hope this correction is of some help to you.

vidya200675

May 4, 2015

Writing Feedback / Excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects writing and reading skills [5]

Some people think that excessive use of mobile phones and computers badly affects writing and reading skills. Do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give your opinion.

Today's technological advances in information technology have many impacts in the budding society. While many are in favor of positive impacts such as improved intelligent quotient and connecting people, others indicate the negative impacts of overuse of these devices on creative skills on students. In my opinion, this is a normal effect of the current revolutionary technological era that we live in.

There are multifarious reasons in which these modern devices aid today's generation, teenagers in particular.
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