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Name: vahid azp
Joined: Jul 2, 2015
Last Post: Aug 28, 2015
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Aug 28, 2015
Writing Feedback / Agree or disagree: Educations nowadays is more difficult than in the past [2]

As usual, whether or not educations nowadays is more difficult than in the past is always a challenging issue. In this regard, a few people would deem that students over the past could easily focus on their education, but others, in contrast, claim that education is the more difficult task today. I am among the people believing that due to change throughout the world, education is more complicated than before in that not only are there a lot of distraction ways for children, but their parents also care less about the education of their children.

The first point which should be mentioned here is that due to a lot of devices, students are easily distracted by them. For example, nowadays, most of the students have smart phones having a wealth of attracting games, music, and movies and so forth. They spend most of their time to meaningless activities. Equally important, thriving social networks get students spent a lot of their time in these networks. Children share their pictures and update their status instead of study their books, or searching on the Internet for their papers. The fact of the matters is that they do not familiar with both the right culture and real concept of using these developments, and it can damage their future lives.

Another reason which should be seen by everyone is that parents spend less time with for children rather than they did in the past. To illustrate more, economic pressures get parents to work hard to overcome it. They pay more attention to financial problems more than other demands of their children. As a result, they do not have enough time to spend with them and observe their educational trend. For example, my father goes to work early at morning until evening; when arriving home, he is very tired. Hence, he cannot solve my educational problems.

By taking into account all the aforementioned reasons, one might come to the conclusions is that children have low tendency for their educational because they spend most of their time with ridicules activities. In addition, parents care less about their children's education. By a lot ways of distraction and busy parents, is it possible the education is much easier than the past?
vahid5570   
Aug 18, 2015
Writing Feedback / Parents should care about their children's education - challenging point [4]

As usual, whether or not parents should care about their children's education than in the past is always a challenging point. In this regard, a few people would deem nowadays parents should observe their children's education, but others, in contrast, asserts that it is not necessary for parents to be involved it. I am among the people believing that the advantages of such approach outweigh the disadvantages in that not only is the level of knowledge of families increased, but competition for finding a proper also is augmented.

The first point which should be mentioned here is that parents today's get familiar more about the importance of education in the future life of their children. The fact of this matter is that thanks to a lot educational programs and books, families become aware that children should be noticed in their education. For example, the administrator of schools nowadays have held a lot of meeting with parents to talk with them about why and how they can help to children. Apart from that, we should think about a lot of ways and devices used by children leads to wasting their time. As an example, children spend most of their time with playing ridicules games and surfing in the Internet. Should parents are involved in their children's education, and how they spend their time, they provides them with using efficiently their life.

Another reason which should be seen by everyone is that the competition between children is increased for finding a suitable job. To illustrate more, nowadays having an educational degree is so prerequisite for every career. Due to for having degree, children should attend in the university and get good scores. If managers select their employee between a wide ranges of people with the same degree; they choose the best of them. In this way, children should improve their knowledge and skills. Hence, that parents are as a great supporter for children is necessary for being successful.

By taking account into all the aforementioned reasons, one might come to the conclusion is that children should be observed by their parents to be succeeded in their education. It is highly recommended parents should care about their children's education to guarantee their future.
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