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Posts by Linda44
Name: linda RAd
Joined: Jul 3, 2015
Last Post: Jul 10, 2015
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From: Islamic Republic of Iran
School: Iran

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Linda44   
Jul 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / Whatever lead our dreams for better life to become a reality, is our experience. [3]

Compare and contrast knowledge gained from experience with knowledge gained from books.

Wisdom comes from the knowledge and knowledge originate from personal experiences and reading. Whatever lead our dreams for better life to become a reality, is our experience. I strongly believe that several factors like shaping insight towards ourselves and others, learning skills, and even writing about various themes cause experiences take advantages of reading.

First, people all around the word make a decision and act based their interpretation about events and communications with others. Making a relationships with other people and getting involved in different situation and duties help them to construct their personal conception in order to manage their affairs. This procedure cannot be acquired by reading some books. For instance, whatever can be effective on our social skills would obtain via identify their own personalities not by reading books.

The second reason for considering preference for experiment, is learning skills. Authors describe some theoretical issues without explain how to fulfil some exercises successfully. For example, for preparing delicious meals, the chief must try to boil, fry, or steam some vegetables or some pieces of meat. If he just read the recipes, he cannot afford cooking well. Practicing continuously improve his cooking skills. Because he would recognize his mistakes and correct them in his next effort.

In spite of the general assumption, majority of books are written according to author's personal experiences and investigations. Most of texts within basic science are excellent paradigms. If scientists do not accomplish crucial experiences in their laboratories, no sufficient book are written, so knowledge do not pass through generations.

In general. We should more pay attention to accept experiences than reading. Because of shaping our point of view, learning skills practically and writing effective books as a gift for the next generaton.
Linda44   
Jul 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / Should developed nations help undeveloped ones in the aspects of health, education and trading [5]

the local people

Dear Friend,
Here are my suggestions:
- Local people ---> natives
- medication and education should also be concentrated which are -----> Developing medical and educational setting should be focused.
- deadly diseases -----> malignant diseases
- Obviously, this tendency might keep rising -------> Hence, this approach should remain continuously

Good like
Linda44   
Jul 10, 2015
Writing Feedback / There are times when it is acceptable not to tell the truth. [4]

Dear Michele9,

its better to abbreviate some sentences. For example you can omit following phrases:
- or just a feeling
- other times months and other times years
you can replace " I am that kind of person that is not able to lie at all" with " I believe in honesty"
Linda44   
Jul 4, 2015
Writing Feedback / Parents are just parents and they are not the best teachers. They are not up to date... [2]

Do you agree parents are the best teachers?

Parenthood have been considered resemble to teacher's duties by some people. Hence, they believe that parents are the best teachers. Although, this is a never- ending debate. But according to my point of view, this approach is not based on reality. Poor knowledge about parenting, lack of sufficient information concerning technology, and unawareness related to teaching method are the most important distinct factors between parents and teachers which leads to do not look alike each other.

First of all, majority of parent rear their kids based on their instinct as well as their experiences acquired through their relationship with their parents across their lives. They do not participate at parenting class. Hence, they are not up to date on parenting technology. Ordinarily, the consequence would be children who resemble their parents with similar tendencies. Moreover, because of their supportive manner, protecting children from harmful situation by restricting from contributing in competitive situation is their main approach to raise kids. However. To learn cope with life challenges required children be encouraged to attend in conflict situation. Furthermore, lake of knowledge of how to shaping children's behaviors, make some emotional problems in their kids. They apply various deprivation and punishment to improve misbehave. But they neglect the profound negative effect of such destructive methods.

Above all, to be an expert in special area, need to keep information fresh. Although, parents reading scientific magazine and are favors of documentary, but they do not have sufficient knowledge about one area of science specifically. Each person have to be familiar with the latest information and device within favorite realm , and as it clear parents cannot provide rich and up to date environment for children' education.

The last and the most important factor in relation to reject the mentioned idea, is methods of teaching. Following the specific instruction in education result in increasing efficacy of teaching and improve children's personality and skills. Receiving appropriate educational services enhance motivation to search for further scientific information. Also, to be familiar with special skills prove opportunity to find a high-income jobs. Unfortunately, parents cannot afford of criteria for teaching their children and consequently, they do not able to develop suitable situation for enhance their children's knowledge.

All in all, I believe that parents are just parents and they are not the best teachers. They are not up to date on parenting technology, are unaware of new science and the latest scientific information as well as, the cannot apply teaching method because they did not learn them.
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