shamey
Jul 18, 2009
Writing Feedback / Least Favorite Place Essay [8]
hellow friends,
this is my first time joining this forum.
I found that, this forum will help our english writings.
so, please read my eassy and let me know tha garametical erros.
thank you.
topic: ''my least fvourite place''
Croydon is a largish town on the outskirts of London. it's a populor shopping center and several larg business have their hedquarters there. many of the people who work in London, which is about half an hour awy by train.
I went to school in Croydon for 6 years and i never liked it. In the first place, there are hardly any historical buildings, so it is a rather dull town. Secondly,it is full of unfriendly peoplewho are too busy to stop and chat. Lastly,because it is on a main road into London, the streets are always full of traffic and some times the air is so polluted that it's almost impossible to breathe.
AS far as i'm concerned, i woud'nt mind if i never went to Croydon again.
hellow friends,
this is my first time joining this forum.
I found that, this forum will help our english writings.
so, please read my eassy and let me know tha garametical erros.
thank you.
topic: ''my least fvourite place''
Croydon is a largish town on the outskirts of London. it's a populor shopping center and several larg business have their hedquarters there. many of the people who work in London, which is about half an hour awy by train.
I went to school in Croydon for 6 years and i never liked it. In the first place, there are hardly any historical buildings, so it is a rather dull town. Secondly,it is full of unfriendly peoplewho are too busy to stop and chat. Lastly,because it is on a main road into London, the streets are always full of traffic and some times the air is so polluted that it's almost impossible to breathe.
AS far as i'm concerned, i woud'nt mind if i never went to Croydon again.
