Annieprincess
Sep 13, 2015
Writing Feedback / Characterist and physical description [3]
Hi I have to write short essay for my English class, but I think there is a lot of errors which I can't see.. Could someone help me please? Thanks.
Ideal beauty has changed through the years and it's still different all around the world. Meanwhile we are bombarded by media with images of slim, long-legged, blue-eyed- simply perfect women or blond-haired, deep blue-eyed men with perfect body. They don't have any defect.
That's how we perceive the ideal beauty in Europe, but things are very different in other countries and cultures. So is there such a thing as ideal beauty?
As I was searching for material to use I found some interesting experiments. One of them was the experiment by Esther Honig. She used photo of herself without make-up and sent it to photoshop artists from more than 28 countries. She had one simple request: Make me beautiful. After that she received 28 completely different pictures of herself.
Similar experiment was made with picture of overweight woman but with same results, but people still makes moves to change their appearance.
People gets tattoos, piercings they grow fat or go on diet. And everything has the same objective. They want to feel beautiful and to be beautiful.
It takes quick glance for someone to make the first impression, which is based on facial expressions, body type, gesture and last but not least on your dress. Even you now have made first impression about my monologue and I can't change it even if I want. I had just a few seconds to make good first impression and its impossible to change it. So quick note for ourselves should be to give our best shot every time.
We should try to be ourselves, stay positive, put on our winning smile, we should be open and confidence is the key to success.
Now I would like to talk about bad and good qualities.. Here are some bad qualities: messiness, arrogance, shyness and laziness. On the other side here are some good qualities: confidence, honest, independence and patience. Lot of bad qualities can be sometimes good, because every boss like their workaholic employee.
Now I would like to describe my mum, who for me is the ideal of beauty. She is the typical blue-eyed and blond-haired woman, but she is definitely not the supermodel type. She's definition of nature beauty. When she enters the room you can see her confidence, mature and easygoing, but the way she is walking she says that you should better not mess up with her. When I and my brother were small she lived on her own with us and that's what I love about her, because she's the most caring and independent woman in the world. Sometimes she can be really bossy but I don't care. Every mother is bossy about her kids, that's how it works. My mum always know what to do and what to say. And even if we sometimes argue I love her.
And one last note: everyone is special in their own way. So don't worry.
Hi I have to write short essay for my English class, but I think there is a lot of errors which I can't see.. Could someone help me please? Thanks.
Ideal beauty has changed through the years and it's still different all around the world. Meanwhile we are bombarded by media with images of slim, long-legged, blue-eyed- simply perfect women or blond-haired, deep blue-eyed men with perfect body. They don't have any defect.
That's how we perceive the ideal beauty in Europe, but things are very different in other countries and cultures. So is there such a thing as ideal beauty?
As I was searching for material to use I found some interesting experiments. One of them was the experiment by Esther Honig. She used photo of herself without make-up and sent it to photoshop artists from more than 28 countries. She had one simple request: Make me beautiful. After that she received 28 completely different pictures of herself.
Similar experiment was made with picture of overweight woman but with same results, but people still makes moves to change their appearance.
People gets tattoos, piercings they grow fat or go on diet. And everything has the same objective. They want to feel beautiful and to be beautiful.
It takes quick glance for someone to make the first impression, which is based on facial expressions, body type, gesture and last but not least on your dress. Even you now have made first impression about my monologue and I can't change it even if I want. I had just a few seconds to make good first impression and its impossible to change it. So quick note for ourselves should be to give our best shot every time.
We should try to be ourselves, stay positive, put on our winning smile, we should be open and confidence is the key to success.
Now I would like to talk about bad and good qualities.. Here are some bad qualities: messiness, arrogance, shyness and laziness. On the other side here are some good qualities: confidence, honest, independence and patience. Lot of bad qualities can be sometimes good, because every boss like their workaholic employee.
Now I would like to describe my mum, who for me is the ideal of beauty. She is the typical blue-eyed and blond-haired woman, but she is definitely not the supermodel type. She's definition of nature beauty. When she enters the room you can see her confidence, mature and easygoing, but the way she is walking she says that you should better not mess up with her. When I and my brother were small she lived on her own with us and that's what I love about her, because she's the most caring and independent woman in the world. Sometimes she can be really bossy but I don't care. Every mother is bossy about her kids, that's how it works. My mum always know what to do and what to say. And even if we sometimes argue I love her.
And one last note: everyone is special in their own way. So don't worry.
