Undergraduate / Students from countryside - Scholarship essay help check my grammar [4]

The first thing i want to say is that UWC scholarship is a miracle with me. I knew the UWC on September 17. It means that i only have 12 days to prepare everything for the application. This process makes me think of my favorite movies: " Mission Impossible". But i find it interesting

The scholarship pulls me out of deadlock. It helps meon my way finding a chance to change my future. I saw UWC while finding a suitable scholarship to go abroad . It's hard for the students from countryside to get a scholarship . There hasn't been any student in my district who received a high school or university scholarship to bo abroad. But UWC made a strong impression on me because it encourages students from countryside to apply. It was a present to me.

As a ambitious girl, i still hold on to my dreams. I cry at many midnights. That's when i come to a deadlock not knowing how to do, when i don't know if my dreams come true or not. Im obsess by my goals.

I always crave for a chance to meet people from all over the world, study in a unique and challenging schools. I also have a special love with cultures and countries in the world. Every summer, i use my savings to catch a bus to Ha Noi, stay at my uncle's house and wandering on the streets to meet, talk and even be a volunteer tour guide for the foreign tourist. Im happy when i tell them about cultures and help them. I like the diversity between cultures and people from every countries in the world. I have a penpal from Thailand for 3 years. We write letters 4-5 times a year, share cultures and give each other the Thai and Viet gifts.

In UWC, students can study with students from all over the world. It's a good chance to learn cultures and communication, train confidence and independence. I always highly appreciate the importance of independence. When i was a kid, i tried to do everything myself. I had my first trip to Ha Noi without my parents when i was 6. From then, i like going away alone every summer vacation. I love traveling. However i don't have much money to have such many trips. My family finance isnt allow me to do that. That's why i have to try a lot to reach that goal

Therefore, if i were received this scholarship, i would have chance to explore the world, contribute my effort to our community with my culture love, connect people, cultures and contries, heal the world and make it a better place. I want to sent my thankful to all people who organize and work for this scholarship . thank you for reading my sharing!

Essays / How your day goes on April 29 2025 - UWC scholarship / speech writing [35]

" Describe how your day goes on April 29 2025"
Can you tell me how to write this essay? I am applying for UWC scholarship.
Thank you !!