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Name: Phuong Anh Nguyen
Joined: Sep 27, 2015
Last Post: Sep 28, 2015
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phuonganh999   
Sep 28, 2015
Scholarship / Why I desire to join the UWC community and reflect on UWC's mission and values - statement [10]

Thank you so much. I very appreciate. And I already accomplished my first essay so I will post it here to ask for your help.

I am a 16 years old girl and I am studying grade 11 at a public school in Ha Noi, Vietnam. Before this time, I have never thought that I will study English in order to take the IELTS Test or research scholarships to study abroad. I simpley learn English as an international language and love it as Russian, which is the language I am studying with a passion. However, I coincidentally knew about UWC as a fate so I researched more about them such as scholarship, students have been sent to UWC colleges. And then, I immediately attracted of UWC's education. There are 9 values but 4 of those 9 values that impressed me are international and intercutural understanding, personnal chanllenges, compassion and service and a sense of idealism. It shows that they not only educate student about basic knowledge but the aim is extend education to foster student become more complete in every way. The major thing is UWC is difference from other colleges since it has humanity in the education system, which is not any programme can contribute as UWC. I am very excited from what I read and I hope UWC can support me achieve my desire is join UWC with a thrill pervasive emotion. In VietNam, studying at school especially public schools is very difficult for student since it is not allowed us have time to break after a long day or participate in a social community to contribute the society. When I knew about the education of UWC, I wanted to turn those unrealistic and boring dreams into reality. I desire fly higher to be studied and experienced reality with a dream can bring happiness and my contribution for the community. Maybe my English and my skills is not good enough but I have a desire, a heart with full of enthusiasm and a passionate soul for learning. I wish for participating UWC to obtain more knowledge, enhance specialized skills and it also will improve my ability to adapt with environmental and people from difference countries. If I have a chance to join UWC, I will endeavour study and dedicate to the society since UWC values educate and contribute a steady knowledge for a student and they also resemble what kind of person I want to be, which is contribute the society better. I love those values of cuturals as well as people and I love UWC!
phuonganh999   
Sep 27, 2015
Scholarship / Why I desire to join the UWC community and reflect on UWC's mission and values - statement [10]

Thank you for your advises.This help me a lot to improve my writing skill. I'm rewriting the essay so when I accomplished, I will post it here to ask for your help if that is alright. Thank you again.

I also have another essay and the subject is: " Describe how your day goes on April 29, 2025"
I want to become a flight attendance so does it appropriate to the essay?
phuonganh999   
Sep 27, 2015
Scholarship / Why I desire to join the UWC community and reflect on UWC's mission and values - statement [10]

Hello, i'm entering for UWC Schoolarship and have 2 essays to finish. i have already done my first essay and i'm writing my second essay. I'm not very well about English grammar so please take a look at my essay and help me t fix it. Thank you so much. It means a lot to me. The subject is:

" Write a statement explaining why you are interested in attending a UWC and reflecting on UWC's mission and values, what you might contribute to the college, and what you would hope to gain from the experience"

When i was young, i always had a desire to explore the world but i do not have enough financial to have journeys to other countries. And from that, my curiosity about distant lands is larger through every years since i just came to Cambodia, which is very close to my country-Vietnam, and other provinces such as Nha Trang, Da Nang, Sai Gon, Hai Phong in my country. In a country as small as mine, it does not take too long to reach the limit of things you can do and see. I only have a chance to read and see other places through books and television channel such as Discovery but even i know all about other countries it still could not make me satisfied by real experiences. I really want to experience new cultures and obtain more knowledge, which is the reason why i start to examine UWC's schoolarship.

A few months ago, I have already done some researches about my destination is Singapore such as people, their lifestyles, traditional food and festivals and i am sure i will explore more in the months i have left. However, the major reason of attending at UWC is i want to show the beautiful of my country's cultures that other countries do not have and i also want to join exchanges between my countries and their countries. Furthermore, it would be interesting to have an opportunity to be acquainted with many friends from difference nations but it also because the singularity of a place where so many viewpoints gather which attracts me.

In conclusion, UWC's values impressed me once i heard and read about them, i was persuade to apply because they resemble what kind of person i want to be and bring the opportunity of experiencing the world to me.
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