rosemaryyy
Nov 9, 2015
Grammar, Usage / "It's a writer&character-based film that is mostly in touch..." - sentence from an essay about film [4]
Thanks :) I'll rewrite my essay as you suggest.
Thanks :) I'll rewrite my essay as you suggest.
rosemaryyy
Nov 8, 2015
Grammar, Usage / "It's a writer&character-based film that is mostly in touch..." - sentence from an essay about film [4]
Hey guys, i started writing a new essay discussing a film I've seen.
But im not sure one sentence in it.
Here it is:
' It's a writer&character-based film that is mostly in touch with the literature and also novelizes the issue of fate in an effective way.'
Hey guys, i started writing a new essay discussing a film I've seen.
But im not sure one sentence in it.
Here it is:
' It's a writer&character-based film that is mostly in touch with the literature and also novelizes the issue of fate in an effective way.'
rosemaryyy
Nov 8, 2015
Essays / Opinion wanted about my literature thesis statement [5]
it's a well-thought-out thesis statement, i think you're on the right way :)
it's a well-thought-out thesis statement, i think you're on the right way :)
rosemaryyy
Oct 31, 2015
rosemaryyy
Oct 31, 2015
Writing Feedback / RESTRICTION TO THE FREE TURKISH MEDIA [3]
Hey guys, i just wrote an essay.Can u find my grammar faults if i've done.
Do you know what's happening in Turkey recently.What is the agenda of inhabitants who live in Turkey right now.Let me say."Coerce to media by the hand of the government baisedly."That sounds outrageous right? In 2015? Unfortunately Turkey turning into an unti-democratic state day by day and we can't even do anything about it.
About 3 days ago, the cops invaded Bugün and Kanaltürk Tv Centre by breaking the door though the resistance of journalist that have been working in the media group.The boss and the many of the workers dismissed so far.Many people from several class of the country have been oppositing because they think the government commiting a law-crime.However, the authorities said that there is no unfair occurance.Obviously in Turkey, the authorities counts the public dumb or blind.
Hey guys, i just wrote an essay.Can u find my grammar faults if i've done.
Do you know what's happening in Turkey recently.What is the agenda of inhabitants who live in Turkey right now.Let me say."Coerce to media by the hand of the government baisedly."That sounds outrageous right? In 2015? Unfortunately Turkey turning into an unti-democratic state day by day and we can't even do anything about it.
About 3 days ago, the cops invaded Bugün and Kanaltürk Tv Centre by breaking the door though the resistance of journalist that have been working in the media group.The boss and the many of the workers dismissed so far.Many people from several class of the country have been oppositing because they think the government commiting a law-crime.However, the authorities said that there is no unfair occurance.Obviously in Turkey, the authorities counts the public dumb or blind.
rosemaryyy
Oct 29, 2015
Undergraduate / Storytelling and Media Class - COLLEGE ESSAY [7]
So do I. Your essay's topic is broad and i also think that you should focus on either your writing skill or your curiosity about films, i don't know :) but the language you used in your essay is interesting and it made me want to read much more. If you work on it and norrow down your topic a bit, im sure that it will be a great essay :)
So do I. Your essay's topic is broad and i also think that you should focus on either your writing skill or your curiosity about films, i don't know :) but the language you used in your essay is interesting and it made me want to read much more. If you work on it and norrow down your topic a bit, im sure that it will be a great essay :)
