Writing Feedback / The silkworm during the cycle of life becomes a new moth. IELTS TASK 1 [2]

The diagram illustrates the cycle of life from silkworm that turned become moth. Overall, the life cycle of the silkworm has 4 stages it begins with placed of eggs and has been completed with biological formation of new moth from a cocoon.

The first, placed of eggs which doing by the female moth in their nest or mulberry leaf and occurring the process during 10 days so that transformed into silkworm lava. After that, silkworm larva process any more as long as 4 until 6 weeks stay around the mulberry leaf so that make a lump of the silk thread. This is where the process diverges, before becoming to new moth, the larva which make a silk thread change into cocoon during 3 to 8 days and the cocoon undergoing the process during 16 days that turn it into a new moth.

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Writing Feedback / The internet gave big impact to human life. Today life would be totally different without it. IELTS2 [2]

The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last 30 years. Without it, our lives would be completely different.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The internet gave big impact to human life. With computer network, everyone can connect each other without limit and with real time. Some people in the world believe due the internet connection they can do everything fast and easier, those think without the internet their life will be flat. This essay will be argued that the internet is the most significant discovery for the last thirty years.

To begin, the internet really helps students to browse information or knowledge. They can save their money from buying a newspaper or book and they do not need to go to library for finding a book they need. In addition, for pupils who want to study abroad or to get scholarship, they can easier get information from the internet. Not only that, they can also send documents required via the internet.

Office working nowadays are different than in the past. Most offices use the internet in every part of division, the internet makes them being connected each other which really help them in transfer data and communication. Staff of offices work fast because the internet. For example, staff promote products of offices in the internet and in a few hours their products have sold out.

To sum up, I agree the internet is best invention that influence all aspects of the way people lived is probably the internet. the internet will be important our life nowadays would be totally different without it. For suggestion, do not using the internet for negative actions using it wisely can improve our life better.

Writing Feedback / IELTS TASK 2: Human being sometimes spend lifetime in one place and live nomad. [3]

In the past, people usually stayed in one place throughout their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different places in their lifetime.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

In the distant past, human being sometimes spend lifetime in one place. Nowadays, those often live in various places in their lifetime or they live nomad. There are have some benefit and disadvantages of both.

At first glance, that inhabitants living in place of birth had advantages such as they felt comfortable with environment and they are can socialize with neighbor it is make they are happy. However, human will have some problems if they did not move for example the place they were live does not develop, few places employment, they could not get a better job, inhabitants probably got bored easily.

On the other hand, some people move place to place in lifetime has benefit and disadvantages. The advantages people live nomads are, first of all, they can meet more friends, they have better job opportunities and they can learn new experience because one place and the other place have different situation. Many people live nomad they life better than inhabitants living in one place. In contrast, people live move place to place also have disadvantages. For instance, they rarely meet with their family, they difficult to adapt with new environment, and people usually complicated to manage their life like they have to prepare new house.

To sum up, Inhabitants live in one place or move place to place in lifetime it is the choice of every individual, because both of this have many advantages and disadvantages. They feel blissfully happy to stay at the same place or move to another place to get new experience.