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vineeth10   
Nov 8, 2015
Undergraduate / Out of the few universities that I visited and applied for, UCF stood out the most. COLLEGE ESSAY! [10]


I've always loved to work with computers. Computers amuse me in how they work, way they respond and work for us humans, how they interact, and how it changed the world from the last three decades. Computers have transformed our way of living and the way of thinking. Computers became part of your daily lives now. I want to be the one who advances the computer technology even further and more advance. This is why I chose to apply for UCF. To make a difference in the world.

The day I visited UCF for an open house, it felt like home. That really didn't happen when I visited other universities. I always felt nervous, uncomfortable, and didn't really feel like I would fit in when I visited other universities. With this university, however, I knew I would prove myself to be something greater. Anything that feels like home is always better for me. This is why I chose to apply for UCF.

The computer and technology businesses are booming today in crating jobs and creating new technologies to make the people's lives less complicated. In joining the computer science program at UCF, it would be a great start for me to thrive towards my goal. Having to learn that UCF has a major research area such as AI (Artificial Intelligence), virtual reality (VR), and human-computer interaction (HCI), I grew to like UCF even more.

Joining UCF's Computer Science program would be the building block for my future and my one goal of making a difference in the world by making the people's lives easier and smarter. This being said, joining UCF would be my dream and my best bet for my success in the future.

Thanks for helping me again!
vineeth10   
Nov 8, 2015
Undergraduate / Out of the few universities that I visited and applied for, UCF stood out the most. COLLEGE ESSAY! [10]

vangiespen

I've always wanted to work with computers. Computers amuse me. The way they work, way they respond and work for us humans, how they interact, and how it changed the world from the last three decades. Computers have transformed our way of living and the way of thinking. I want to be the one who advances the computer technology even further. This is why I chose to apply for UCF. To make a difference in the world.

IS this intro better? @vangiespen
vineeth10   
Nov 5, 2015
Undergraduate / Out of the few universities that I visited and applied for, UCF stood out the most. COLLEGE ESSAY! [10]

COLLEGE ESSAY! IMPORTANT!

Now that I've grabbed your attention, can you please proofread my essay? Thanks!

Why did you choose to apply to UCF?

Out of the few universities that I visited and applied for, UCF stood out the most. I Chose to apply to UCF because I knew this university would give me hope. A hope that gives me an opportunity that pushes me forward in life that I am aiming for. A successful path in life requires a successful university. This university is one of them. So, I chose UCF to be my pathway to success.

I want to major in Computer Science. When I was looking at universities that are near, affordable, and had Computer Science as one of the top majors, I saw this university as my best option and an opportunity to succeed. This university campus also impressed me in how big and how great it is. It's rich history and success stories that came from this university would attract everyone...including me.

What even attracted me more was the university's ranking. During my research about UCF, I found out that this university was ranked among the top universities in United States of America! Not only that! I also found out that UCF's Computer Science is one of the best 100 in the world! Also, the metropolitan research in UCF was the 3rd largest in the nation! When I found this out, this university instantly became my dream school. With the graduation rate of 67%, which is above average, and an average income of at least $70,000 after graduation, this university could kick start my pathway to success.

When I visited UCF for an open house, I was dazed by how big and beautiful this university was. It was so huge that I felt like I was in a mini city. Almost like a paradise! My instincts told me that this is where I have to go.

This university, like I said, is my first choice to attend. Beautiful campus, great classes, top notch Computer Science program, and affordable. All these qualities are what makes my vision of a perfect university.
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