Writing Feedback / In a few decades, development of technology has changed the life of ordinary society - IELTS 2 [2]

Earlier technological development brought more benefits changes to the life of ordinary people than the recent technological development will. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In a few decades, development of technology has changed the life of ordinary society. It is agreed that the earlier technological development give outweigh the recent technological development.

First and foremost, earlier development of technology has become the most influenced sector in society's life. Almost every aspect of what people need is using technology. Furthermore, technology has developed rapidly due to competitive issues in global, thus, it has given tremendous benefits for changes of ordinary society. However, it would become harmful if the technological development will increase continuously in the future. There are several negative impacts to deal with. For instance, the news regarding robotic technology has been popular today. Some companies in several countries conduct experiment in developing robotic which aim to create an easier way to help the society. They create robotic to work in the restaurant as a waiter which can enhance process of cooking and customer service. The impact of this case, however, many societies would be difficult to find a job. It would cause an increase of unemployment and even number of poverty in the countries.

Another impact that would happen because the recent technological development will is the society would acquire something easily for waiting at home. They are able to buy some items from online store or call the store so that they do not need to go outside. It means that they tend to spend their time only at home. It causes they would get lack of social life and lack of exercise, thus, they tend to become individualist and they are vulnerable to get the diseases such as obesity.

In conclusion, the recent development of technology would give negative impacts outweigh the positive ones in my aspects of the society's life. They tend to become individualist and they easily get disease due to lack of mobility in their daily life.

Writing Feedback / BECAUSE ACTION SPEAKS LOUDER [2]

Some people believe that environmental problems are too big for individuals to deal with, while others think that that individuals should take some action. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

BECAUSE ACTION SPEAKS LOUDER

Currently, there are some issues toward the environment should be noticed by the individual, because several problems of the environmental impacts have rapidly appeared in the society. As a contributor of the impacts, each individual should take some actions to reduce the environmental problems. It would not become too big for individuals instead of doing nothing for their own environment.

First and foremost, there are some environmental problems which have to be faced out by the community today, such as flood which occurs every year and pollution particularly in the big cities. These problems would rise significantly time by time if there is no one has initiatives. The most important thing is individuals should take some actions together to solve the environmental problem. Each individual should contribute in many ways, for instance in health aspect, individuals who have been practitioners in health service have a responsibility to communicate and persuade the community to prevent their area from waste in order to avoid the flood.

In addition, environmental problems would be easier to solve if the government support the society as well. Individuals can be more enthusiasts to face the problems. It would be a good way to educate youth generation because they become pioneers for change of the environment.

In conclusion, it is clear that the best solution for solving the environmental problems that individuals should take some actions continuously. It would never become too big for individuals to get and live in a better environment, because action speaks louder than anything.